I hate to criticize but I think that it should be different, even though it will be a little unfair. The Human ships should be unable to fire weapons as they head for jumps between planets so they can charge up slip space(phase) drives and when they reach edge, they jump, or if they are at edge, just normal charge up. The Covenant should be able to charge faster though b/c they are more advanced.
very nice
I hate to criticize but I think that it should be different, even though it will be a little unfair. The Human ships should be unable to fire weapons as they head for jumps between planets so they can charge up slip space(phase) drives and when they reach edge, they jump, or if they are at edge, just normal charge up. The Covenant should be able to charge faster though b/c they are more advanced.
actually, it looks alright but i thought it could look more like the arrival affect
Fluff corection, slipspace portals are kind of red/pink, and look chaotic inside.
Does that not look choatic enough for you? :P
you can see the Infinite Sacrifice jumping out in the begining of ODST
and you can see the separatists in in Halo 3
you should use these as a reference
awesome looking