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I had just announced the game develop halting just yesterday. The reasons are financial, as you probably guessed. I'm still waiting for feedback from alpha testers but I have a strong feeling what I will cover will be pretty in-line with what they will say.

Truth be told, the narrative issues Zofia had were known fairly early into production.

The biggest issue Zofia has is a lack of narrative and characters. This is a strange problem because Zofia had hundreds of lines of dialogue. There was a significant and lengthy dialogue tree you could go over if you talked to the 2nd player, Odo. I actually cut it from the Alpha last second because it had one of the most important plot-twists in the game, and you could accidentally reveal it if you simply kept on talking to him randomly, which was not ideal for an Alpha.

In hind sight maybe that would have been good to kept in as it would have called to question everything you do in the game.

Zofia actually has a surprising amount of writing that was executed pretty poorly, a lot of story and character simply didn't get into the game. I think in the Alpha, cut content aside, the protagonist Alda speaks less than 10 lines. Incredible. You may not even realize her name is Alda.

Alda

There are a couple (originally) good reasons for this, and one of them was not one I expected: My friends and family were excited for my game. I originally intended for the storyline to have some dark parts, one of the main characters is a tragic hero, who only realizes that close to the end of his character arc.

But then I had friends who wanted to play it, family members who were interested in seeing it. Most of my family would probably not want to play this type of game. After some thought into this I opted to water the story down and simplify characters, I think this was a pretty big mistake that hurt the overall experience and the Alpha shows a lot of this.

Another reason for the lack of narrative is my own fault, I was absolutely determined to make the plot introduction minimal. Why? I've seen it done before. I think when done right it can be a very powerful method for storytelling. Alda originally had two introduction levels to her story, both of which I think were significantly better than what eventually resulted. The replacement was, of course: You simply start on the beach and go can exploring.

EXCITING.


The next mentioned reason for narrative issues was the need for co-op. I intended the game to be co-op from the start, but some of the story was written without putting that into deep thought. Some of it went down to:

"Wait, what will the other player be doing during this sequence?"

Which led to cutting those parts out. Which is a shame because I think with some minor edits it could have been avoided. Instead several scenes ended up with the protagonist simply copied and pasted:

Co-op

Last reason for the narrative issues? You guessed it: Skill. I ran into a lot of issues getting what story I did have into the game because of a lack of skill. I feel I've made notable progress in learning game development from this project but I still don't feel my animations skills are refined enough to do some of the heavy lifting the story needs.

I think this is particularly frustrating because all the pieces were already in-place for a much better story, but they were literally pulled out in fear of hitting too mature of subjects, me feeling the story had too much exposition (not minimal enough), or having story pulled because it wasn't as skillfully done.

2(One of the first builds)


It's notable that the game never finished, a lot of these issues were fixable. The original builds, pictured above, had a neater narrative early on despite it being so incomplete. (old Gameplay was bad though)

I wouldn't say Zofia as a project is gone though. Development is halted, sure, but I think this is one that I will revisit later on. We'll see.

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Lucífer
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Saw your comments on the Escapist Group page, I lol'd.

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Warner
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Just saying this - I have a feeling the next Elder Scrolls game may be something called "The Elder Scrolls VI: Landfall"

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Based on what evidence?

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Your group just shot up in views: Moddb.com

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Wearing shades for the summer?

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It is bright outside.

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i liked Ninja_Dave much more.

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JustDaveIsFine Creator
JustDaveIsFine

Me too.

Fixed.

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Duruk
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Congratulations with your first place. Excellent entry

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Mxthe
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Yeah man, congrats on the win !

Enjoy the game, it's awesome !

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Thanks!

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