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Definitely an improvement over the first one, but there are still major problems as far as lighting, the occasional clipping issues, and the overall atmosphere go.
Sorry, I was unimpressed overall. I wasn't scared, really. Even when certain things happened, it was fairly obvious they were going to happen, and many things just made little sense.
I reviewed this on FG's forums as well, so here's a summary of my thoughts:
It's your first story, that's fine. That said, there are clipping issues abound, unrefined lighting, not much of a story present (though you said there would be in future chapters. Unfortunately, this is a review for this chapter.)
I think you can do much much better, with more practice.