Shortly after the citadel exploded, Gordon's train was teleported to a beach in which was farther away from white forest than he anticipated. He makes his way through the coastline, caves, and outlands to destroy a combine weapon capable of destroying the rocket in white forest.

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Mr.Walrus
Mr.Walrus Sep 15 2010, 10:11pm says:

Vast improvments, excellent work :D

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Reeze17
Reeze17 Sep 15 2010, 10:14pm says:

This looks really cool.

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Xylemon
Xylemon Sep 15 2010, 10:35pm says:

Looks pretty sexy.

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Spare
Spare Sep 15 2010, 10:56pm says:

The only thing that stands out as odd is the clean yellow tank on the roof. Other than that it looks fantastic!

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Callinstead09
Callinstead09 Sep 16 2010, 5:00pm replied:

It looks odd to me too, but because it's a nuclear fuel tank! I think one of the rusty tanks would look better.

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Slaver
Slaver Sep 16 2010, 2:43am says:

sure youre not a god?

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drimp
drimp Sep 16 2010, 2:53am says:

Looks good although I don't like the hl2 grass / sand (or gravel but looks sand) it just doesn't go with the area because it's too colourful. I suggest for you guys to get some textures made for your selves, it'll make your mod look much better. That or you could try adding something in there. I just feel where that texture is looks really boring at the moment. Lastly the cliff needs to maybe be made a little more random.

Please don't take this as bad the map does look good, I'm just trying to give some constructive feedback to help the mod.

Cheers, drimp

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jangalomph Author
jangalomph Sep 16 2010, 4:13pm replied:

We have some custom textures. Just havn't got blends for them quite yet ;). We will have tons of custom assets like textures and models.

Thanks,
Jangalomph

PS. I like constructive crits! Helps the mod look better!

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drimp
drimp Sep 17 2010, 1:43pm replied:

Sounds good, can't wait to see the maps with them. :D

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Lancelot_59
Lancelot_59 Sep 16 2010, 9:15am says:

Looks good!

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Shirk
Shirk Sep 16 2010, 3:31pm says:

I suggest make the cliffs not and L, and make them more "displaced"

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Held
Held Oct 6 2010, 4:09am says:

so you made the base mod, too ?

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jangalomph Author
jangalomph Oct 6 2010, 5:07pm replied:

Yes, I made base mod.

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MajorBanter
MajorBanter Oct 25 2010, 7:15pm says:

A nice hilly skybox could add some depth.

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Added things people asked for. More details etc. Any crits?

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