From the Journal of Test Subject #232: 31.21 N, 28.71 W. 2043 AD. It's hard to believe that just fifty years ago people were worried about the water levels rising. I joined the Testing Course Program just a week ago and they brought me to one of these island mountains. Ever since the Combine came they had been sucking up the water and sending it back to wherever they came from. So the water level fell so far that the underwater mountains became islands, then hills, and then finally towering mountains, jutting out of the water like some kind of massive wrecked ship. Then after the Combine were beaten away, this new Aperture corporation went around claiming all these mountains for research. Word was, they were extremely benevolent up until the founder died, and then they built this big robot lady to replace her. Then the tests got worse. The scientists around the place don't seem to know, and that seems odd. I'll just say I feel sorry for the next subject.
So I created this ambient loop in GarageBand. Tell me what you think please.
It's alright. Maybe add a little low pitched hum in the background that changes pitch just a little bit every few seconds. Listen to some of the ambient music in Portal and you'll see what I mean. (And the loop kind of gets annoying after a while, make it flow better and change it up a bit.)
Hmm... OK, I think I can do that.
Alright, what about now.