Your name is Michael Underwood. What started as enjoyable part time work in a magnificent castle soon turned into a living nightmare, a nightmare you feared would finish you off... but you did what no-one else has been able to do: you escaped. But your ordeal is far from over. To get out of the Castle you must venture back into the darkness, find the Master key and escape. The Earl of Brackenburg has servents roaming the halls, dont let them find you!
Before i start, i would just like to note that this is the first mod that i have ever given a 10 too in the past few months i've been playing/reviewing Custom Stories.
- Really Scary Atmosphere
- The right amount of tinderboxes and oil
- Monster spawns were done sparingly at the start and in good places.
- Dramatic build up at the start which held true throughout the CS.
- No bugs or glitches, minus one with a lock which really wasn't serious.
- A decent story with an interesting finale (when you recover from your Amnesia fully)
- The Castle design was fantastic, it really felt like i was in a castle/mansion of sorts.
- The detail of each area and environment was great. When i was in Storage it felt like i was in a massive underground Castle Storage Room, same with the Wine Cellar and Guest Rooms.
- Good use of Light and Dark areas, plenty of torches/lanterns to light if needed.
- Sound effects were used to great effect, and often made me jump
Things to improve on:
- Next time it would be great to see some voice acting added in as long as it's done to a great extent like the rest of the mod.
- A possibly more engaging story, that's not to say this one wasn't, but a few more side plots or side quests would be cool.
This is my favourite of two mods i've played this year, and i strongly encourage you to continue making mods to this quality, because you have great potential and have nailed modding on your first attempt
Kudos to you and thankyou yet again for this mod!
I truly enjoyed this! One of the atmospheric and really good mods recently played.
I have enough oil, it took me over 2 hours because I just stop looking how greatly you have mapped everything I loved that Storage area there are some little floating entities, but it's fine. Scares are really nicely placed and didn't ruined atmosphere not even once! End maps were really terrifying and that one chase was intense and I was like "WAAAH he's gonna get me, he's gonna get me" and just made it to the door. Wow, great job there and it was long that was really good part! Maps are just really beautiful all assets, enviroment everything was nicely fitted, but maybe little originality with the map sizes and never-seened stuff, however I enjoyed it and only felt little disappoint at the end because that little maze and many prison cells and those grunts was little annoying for me.
What need to improve:
- Maybe more original / never-seened puzzles + something new
- More unique stuff
This is just my opinion and I'm just helping to get you even better, but I love your mapping skills no problem there, maybe more work on the billboards, but I'm satisfied :)
Overall this was great triumph and I give you eight for hard effort, well done man as your first! :)
I tracked this a while back and I'm really glad I did.
The premise is simple. You have to escape, but to do that you have to go to the deepest regions of the castle and back again.
There's a goal, a reason to throw yourself into torture chambers, not simply, I HAVE AMNESIA AND I DONT KNOW WHAT TO DO GUESS ILL JUST GO BACK IN THE DUNGEONS AGAIN.
Guy says it's his first story and he didn't even know how to script before making this. This is one of the finest CS's I've played in a long time. Please make another one sir, it was a fun ride. It was also very scary and had a really unnerving atmosphere. Excellent pacing that kept me guessing again and again. You might THINK you know what's gonna happen next but you really don't. There are no generic "pick up key and monster spawns" encounters here. They all make sense and surprise the **** out of you.
I was amazed by this story and the truths behind castle Brackenburg! A really great Amnesia experience I highly recommend to anyone looking for a great story to play!
When I saw the description, my first though was: "Oh, another you must ecape story, this will not be that special probably". You showed me wrong! If this really is your first story, then please don't stop making stories! You have level design skills :)
Oh, and as I said in a comment I left, don't use flying naked guys! You didn't use them in this story but you said you thought about using them. Look how it turned out when you didn't use them ;p
- Incredibly good level design (do you work for frictional games? You should)
- Long story
- Good story-line
- Perfect atmosphere
- Scares are a bit repetitive
- No autosaves (although few people know what they do, so no points removed)
- A few glitches in the level design, although nothing huge really. A fireplace had fire sounds even though no fire was on, and in the dungeon part, at the suitors first appearence, there was a table and a couple of shelfs right next to the table. I could jump behind the shelf and get stuck there. Was forced to load from the latest saved game
10/10 - Masterpiece
Just wonderful,i have to say i played alot of good custom stories and all were very well made,but this..was AWESOME!!even if it's little said,it was the greatest cs i ever played..it hold all the elements a good custom story should have :) Nice work bro! :)
This is one of the absolutely best crafted custom stories I've played. The level design and scripting is flawlessly executed and very atmospheric.
If I have something "negative" to say, it's that it felt a bit like a light version of the main Amnesia story. Many puzzles and settings seem to be the same as in Amnesia, only...lesser. The general professionalism of the mod overcomes this sense of deja-vu though, whereas most "me too!" mods fail to create any atmosphere at all, since you always know when you can run mindlessly, when you'll hear the growls, who's a poofer and who's not, when the Alexander picture will change, etc. This mod has a sense of familiarity, but still manages to build a menacing atmosphere. This is because the creator understands that fear is as much about anticipation (when you create your own demons) as about release, and not just "grunts are scary, so let's throw grunts at the player", without a proper mounting of terror within the player's mind.
Another thing is that I thought the mod felt a bit too scripted early on. Although a degree of linearity is often necessary in order to present a story, the trick is to create the illusion of non-linearity. There's a fine line between you playing the game, and the game playing you. I thought the mod was on the wrong side of this line in the beginning, but it passed away, and the remainder was a thoroughly enjoyable experience.
I haven't finished this mod only because it had a really bad bug.
-I was in the lower water area and I was in the machine room. I had put everything in the machine (coal new cogs) and the water monster came up in the machine room! I know for a fact it wasn't supposed to do that because there wasn't any water!
-I might be mistaken, but after you fix the machine, the water level is supposed to drop correct?
-I like how big the map is, but don't exaggerate it. I thought there were too many room and I felt as if I was going in complete useless rooms. I know that's like the whole point of a game but this one had a couple too many unnecessary rooms.
- I really like the story line. It's a definite one of a kind story!
- The atmosphere literally makes me want to have unlimited amounts of oil. It's creepy!
- The monsters are put in the right timings and some were definitely unexpected!
- Right amount of oil and such
- Good puzzles
I thoroughly enjoyed this brilliantly made mod! Possibly fix those bugs and I might just give you a 10/10! ;) I don't give those out very often. :) Great job!