Comments - Raidforce

ok, that needs a visual redesign sorry to say. I like your new content, but this level is kind of lacking.

wow nice! but just to add effect, up the lighting intensity a bit to match better. ;)

I think you should scrap that body. :\ I like the head and wings, but the rest of the body seems unrealistic. Try looking up more references on dragons for your model. Here:
Natsuki-shula.deviantart.com

Dimar-dragon.deviantart.com

now this one is cool! I cant wait to see how you guys pull this scene off.

I dont particularly like the composition on this one. I feel like I am being driven to focus on unimportant parts of this picture.

seeing this ingame will be a sight to behold, I like where this one is going.

what does it matter if he can call it his work here? does it being his work have any relevance to how much it helps convey his idea? I like what you created, but a little stereotypical of a beginning for such a different machinima.

It has some perspective problems, but I guess that isnt the point of these concepts. Solid design, and definitely conveyed well into the game.

hey, simian, nice to have a sound designer on board for Neptune! Thanks for adding me to your friends list, I will keep tabs on what you are working on as I am part of helping with the story and mood of the game.

lol, I came up with an idea around the ship being partially sunken, so you were on the same idea track as me. :P They went without that part, but still cool coincidence.

awesome, a mod page is up for the game! If you are a concept artist, being good at environments is a definite must, since most of the horrors will probably be related to the ocean and the dangers of the ocean-liner itself.

the anatomy of the soldier looks a little skewed, and certain body parts are lacking in form. Otherwise, it looks awesome!

viruses change?

I think you might want to reconsider some story facts, like the 6 billion to 100,000 thing. I dont think that within a year, a non-airborne/waterborne disease could reach the Americas. I think it would be a good idea to constrain the story to the Eastern Continents, instead. This game looks like a wonderful mod for Crysis, and I can't wait to try it out. (and get crysis :P)

Nice! It looks better than the original winter-world in every way, and the burning boat part looks like a really great quest.