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May 30 2011 Anchor

Hey guys so i'm rly pinned down here i dont know what the real gamers and modders think about my User interfaces but i guess i could use some of you guys a help all of them are totally coded and animated i just dont have the videos yet but meh what the hell i just want your honest oppion what to make better whats wrong etc etc again thank you guys
Futuristic online Menu:(OPEN EMBED)
User Posted Image

Clean HUD(OPEN EMBED):
User Posted Image
Acorn island menu( i also have a loading screen but i didnt finished it yet)

Violent Pill loading screen:


Unamed HUD:

no feed back? :(

Edited by: Mrclaudespeed

iqew
iqew VFX Artist
May 31 2011 Anchor

Hey Tiago,

I think your UI design looks really solid, meaning professional. The icons are clean and easy to identify, the styles fit together and it looks easy to use. The only thing I don't like is the pill symbol in that loading screen and the position of the text. Just add some depth to the pill with light and shadow and place the text lower, so it doesn't block the action to look at. Otherwise, really fine design.

cheers.

Edited by: iqew

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May 31 2011 Anchor

Looks fairly nice. Needs some more glossy and retail aspects to the HUD and UI's though. I own Xitol Frontline a large team who are producing a retail game. We have members who have worked on AAA game such as FEAR, FEAR 2 and more. Add me on skype at minxedgames or email me at archie@frontlinestudio.co.uk or simply PM me.

Arxae
Arxae Resident Stepmania Freak :D
May 31 2011 Anchor

The first UI looks awesome :D The rest of them are pretty solid :)

But i'm with iQew on this one, the pill symbol just looks out of place and quite flat. maybe want to go and take a look at that :)

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May 31 2011 Anchor

thank you both guys i already emailed you Archie.

And iQew many thanks man to tell me whats wrong and so on it really helps me to improve.

Octimus
Octimus Mr Maya
May 31 2011 Anchor

well sometimes there spot on good job.

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May 31 2011 Anchor

What do you mean death_octimus?

Octimus
Octimus Mr Maya
May 31 2011 Anchor

very hard to crit.

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May 31 2011 Anchor

Thank you :D

Neurological
Neurological Musician/Composer
May 31 2011 Anchor

My only criticism is on the second shot. The circles around the amm and grenades, I think it would be better witoout it, and have the ammo icon the same height of the counter numbers. It goes too much on the eyes when playing IMO, but other than that is simple and informative, and is a thing I like.

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May 31 2011 Anchor

Neurological wrote: My only criticism is on the second shot. The circles around the amm and grenades, I think it would be better witoout it, and have the ammo icon the same height of the counter numbers. It goes too much on the eyes when playing IMO, but other than that is simple and informative, and is a thing I like.


Thanks ^^

Jun 17 2011 Anchor

iQew wrote: Hey Tiago,

I think your UI design looks really solid, meaning professional. The icons are clean and easy to identify, the styles fit together and it looks easy to use. The only thing I don't like is the pill symbol in that loading screen and the position of the text. Just add some depth to the pill with light and shadow and place the text lower, so it doesn't block the action to look at. Otherwise, really fine design.

cheers.

I agree with you, let us exchange next time!

Jul 2 2011 Anchor

i'm still apllying for paid works mates

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