character concepts .Pilot .. need crits Thread

I prefer 4 and 8. You get the cybernetics without it becoming too busy as to become unreadable, and the visual design of the two seem the strongest. You could continue those motifs throughout the rest of his costume and kit to pull the whole gestalt together.

i like them all, but number 1 is my favourite. nicely done.

I like the shape of the eyemask in version 4, makes the character look cool!

no. 6 looks the most natural to me
The curved lines on the neck may help

They all look good but no. 7 looks the best for a basic one the rest have to much stuff on them unless they are like part human part robot : ) would be cool add abit of it to the face on the cheeks

They are all stretched a bit, aren't they? I don't see a pilot in any of them, though the drawing itself is good. Perhaps try a more loose approach first and ground your study on elements from reference (e.g. helmets, pilot gear, spacesuits). As it is now this guy looks more like some kind of bionic man.