Maybe the mod is a bit short but it is my first custom story xD

To download the custom story, go here:
Mediafire.com

PD: Be sure to check every corner of each map, there can be useful stuff

Warning: This custom story may be a bit hard due to limited stuff (oil, sanity potions, health potions, tinderboxes). Also there are many insanity moments. Hope you enjoy my first custom story. :D

I would accept all kind of comments (good, bad, etc).
Bad comments would help me to learn and make better what i did bad.

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The Chemical Factory

The Chemical Factory

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Your name is Logan, you are an expert at chemistry. The monsters kidnapped you because they want you to make chemicals for them. Destroy their chemical...

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Guest
Guest

Just a few nitpicks I have...

1: The Notes

While I found the notes from the Brute and Suitor to be rather hilarious (possibly for the wrong reason) I think it is a bit weird that they refer to themselves as such.

2: The Monsters

The story was fun, but there was very little scare factor due to the large amount of monsters. After a bit you can reliably predict when the next ones will come, and that kind of ruins any scare factor.

3: The Hidden Keys

Do I need to say anything? They weren't hidden very well to be honest, instead of a clever hiding spot most are camouflaged into the floor or something.

4: The Archives

Um...WHY.

Water section was not needed..

There was a lot of potential in this map, and I'm not trying to put you down. Just a few personal critisms.

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Trooper-
Trooper-

[sorry for VERY late response) yeah, to be honest I didn't know what I was doing, I just wanted to make a custom story because it seemed fun and it was fun

I commpletely agree with what you say, at that time I couldn't see it sadly

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cooperc005
cooperc005

Hi

I tried this CS... I can't get out of the beginning. I look under all the boxes for the key and it isn't there. I look behind and under the dressers and the key isn't there. Any chance maybe it got bugged? (p.s. I'm using Justine)

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AquaTrooper Creator
AquaTrooper

It is under a box but it camouflages with the floor xD

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AquaTrooper Creator
AquaTrooper

the key is under a box in a corner

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Psykljudet
Psykljudet

You should consider adding the story to the description and upload it to ModDB to bring in more attention

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