Amnesia: Home From Work mod

Edits like changing lantern model/properties or reworking sanity system should be made within full conversion mod, not custom story so all these changes affect only your mod, not all of them. I don't think you need to create fc just yet, but if you really want custom lantern you should think about it. As for a ghoul there shouldn't be any problem using it in a cs. You actually don't have to put the ghoul files in root entities folder, that's only for level editor. Game will work just fine having all files only in your cs folder, and that's all regular players need

Finished it

Well, good to start from saying the in-game title for this mod is still lost in the forest

I honestly don't know what to say since I played this mod like half a year ago and only 1 small map was added, even the same clipping walls are here. If that happens add 0.001 to X,Z axis if it's clipping vertically or to Y if horizontally. (like floor or ceiling)

There's still no music, all puzzles are looking for keys, I had to use level editor to find the one in a small gap behind the library shelf. As you asked I'm not gonna be harsh but if the puzzle is a key behind some random object or on top of a shelf, consider not having any puzzle at all or just putting the key on top or inside a desk, I guarantee you players will prefer that

Monster is walking along his pathnodes correctly, but if enemy is present in the level you should place nodes in every room. Those are not only to show enemy where to patrol, but also how it should chase you. If there's none then it will run straight, most likely getting stuck on wall or some table.

Design is overall not bad except for clipping walls, the way you used door frames as shelves is also nice. Lighting could use some rework though, starting from boxlight to cover the entire area(not always needed, but in bright areas it's just adding yourself extra work with pointlights)

But the best part of this mod your attitude, being open for help is always good, though there's not many people around to help nowadays. If you want I can help you with scripting, I'm at home almost 24/7 now and now I only sporadically help 1 person with scripting, so it shouldn't be a problem for me. Some examples of my experience on this I can send you on discord(LivajQ#8815) but I guess you could also just download my random monster survival mod and play it/analyze hps files, it's 90% rng system. Fixing maps by adding welders and some ornaments is also an option