This is a short demo from my upcoming custom story The Anguish. The year is 1856. You are a rich doctor, who lives a wonderful life. You have a beautiful wife, a big mansion, money and a loyal butler. But then one night when you arrive home from your friend, where you have drank wine with him, you notice that something is wrong...
Amazing Custom Story, really scary!! i love it
Pretty short and simple, not bad tho!
Really short, but well designed. The grunt gave me quite the jump there, haha, well played. Map design is good, just wish it was longer.
I'm going to be honest and say there could have been a lot of improvements:
Good things:
-Custom music
-Okay level design
-A few good jumpscares
Bad things:
-Some cheap jumpscares
-Level design could be improved
-Not much of a story (will be explained further on)
-A couple of simple quests
I'll start by saying: The level design was all right but it could have been improved. Welders are missing, there are a few empty corridors, I like how some of the rooms look but again, it could have been improved.
The jumpscares on the other hand, some of them were good and some were cheap. There were mostly cheap ones for example, the iron maiden and the knight scare. They didn't make much sense. And the story. There wasn't really a story but that once you enter your house, you notice things are wrong. Other than that, it's just roaming around collecting keys and jumpscares and stuff.
It's a good thing you made a demo though.
Note: I'll be changing my score and review once the full version is out.
5/10 Mediocre
Super mega awesome custom story the
best one i've played :D 10/10
DEMO!?
A good start, a small amount of well placed scares but to short to have any real conclusion on the story/leveldesign.
good job ok... but more to build
awesome story i have played it millions of times now!!!!!!