Stuff like these first texts at the beginning are pretty good anyway, You would do better using your time further on where they never got the non translator improvements. The stuff at the start is mostly good enough already redone its just as you progress people did not have the patience to do this all the way through. Which is a shame. Have you? There is a hell of a lot of text to figure out and fix. I would not bother with what is already understandable. Unless you really will do it all, but thats a serious amount of work and time. So if it is understandable, even though you can improve it just do what needs doing. Its probally hundreds of hours of work this way
Stuff like these first texts at the beginning are pretty good anyway, You would do better using your time further on where they never got the non translator improvements. The stuff at the start is mostly good enough already redone its just as you progress people did not have the patience to do this all the way through. Which is a shame. Have you? There is a hell of a lot of text to figure out and fix. I would not bother with what is already understandable. Unless you really will do it all, but thats a serious amount of work and time. So if it is understandable, even though you can improve it just do what needs doing. Its probally hundreds of hours of work this way