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A mod about Random Stories that I wrote and recreated in Source.
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What do you think?
I love how colorful the maps are. Everything now usually has so much color correction. It's a nice effect, definitely, but it's aging. This is a pretty nice deviation.
Just some random suggestions based on my personal preference:
- Change the fence posts (on the left side of the shot) from being a yellow-color to a sort of desaturated brown.
- Make the curbs a little shiny (but not to the point that they look *wet*), so they look painted.
- Add a wheelchair ramp to the stairs on the back.
- Add a couple more trees to the greenery on the right. Preferably small variations in size.
- The second story on the right side, the handrails: Increase the vertical width of the vertical 'beam' (upper bar) and decrease the horizontal width of the horizontal beams.
Again, these are just random ideas that come to mind, not criticisms. Your work here already is great. Sorry for the large comment, but I know it sucks to have no feedback.
Thanks for the suggestions Crypt :)
And Btw, everything you said is in the real place where I get inspired for making this :)