Amnesia: Long Way Down ( Cancelled ) mod

hey man i dont if you are still active or not but why you cancelled it you dont demostrate a review why

I don't know if you're still active, or even if this story is still being made; but if so, please contact me as soon as you can. The custom story seems great, the level design is very good and I like the general idea of it.

There is one problem, however, the grammar. Whilst, like I said previously, it is a good custom story so far, the grammar is lacking greatly and that is something that I can help you with. I would, of course, do it for free, however, I request that if you allow me to correct your grammar, you put my name in the credits - "Levi Higginson", thank you.

I'm stuck in a family house on the 2nd floor where the door boarded up and billiards

Не могу пройти дальше со второго этажа особняка-видать много ошибок у вас

I played some of the demo and it is definitely an interesting concept. Most custom stories that I have seen do not take place in a modern setting. A few pointers I would like to give that you may or may not know. Firstly, watch out for clipping textures and other level design errors. With clipping textures, I have discovered that separating them by 0.001 is not effective at a long distance. This means that if you are up close to the area, the textures do not clip, but if you are far away, then they do glitch out. If they do glitch out, just separate the textures some more. Second, and you probably have already done this, have an intro sequence. When I walked around the village area, I passed by a house that was supposed to be mine. Perhaps the story could start out in the house. Also, this might be a bit tedious, but whenever you use cellarbase door frames with cellarbase door ways, look above the door frame really closely, and you'll find a little glitch that never got past Frictional Games' eyes. Besides those two little things, the demo was good for a demo. The village was nicely put together even though the old style of the houses and the cars did not match. The trees and grass were a nice touch as well. The mansion looked really good and I am also glad that you actually build the inside to be compliant with the outside. What I mean is that you did not pull a, "walk into a small shack and then the inside is a huge mansion." Inside the mansion, the design was averagely good. The ambiance is something to be proud of though. It made me feel like power was actually running through the mansion and the knocking sound effect that would play every so often made me cautious on moving fast. When I took a look at the mansion in the HPL editor, I noticed that there was supposed to be an "office typewriter" on the desk, but it was invisible. Even if it isn't for you, always check the .mat files of non-amnesia textures to make sure they have the right image files and are the correct type of material. The light switches also need to be scripted to work, and try not to stretch or compress textures too unevenly (such as putting the x-scale on .5 and the y-scale on 1.5 while leaving the z-scale on 1). Overall, the demo was an interesting concept that, with plenty of development, could turn into a great custom story.

-Matthew Studios

judging by the screens you've done a lot more than what you've showed us in this demo which leads to the fact there is tons of work put into the mod already? i really hope you will not let all of that wasted. keep working on this man, i'd like to see this as a whole thing. i liked the demo, i know there's lot more in there :)