Lake Side City mod for Half-Life 2

Hello, this mod is about cops and robber so far we are planning to have a story line and multiplayer, we have a few good ideas for the story line but are still working on it here is what we have so far-(update 9/18/06)
"Dispach we have a 64 on lakeside dr. 1st.bank. all avalable units close in."
suv speeding down roads dodgeing cars and running lights.
another police car speed out behind them and they now travle together.
As they arive 5 gangsters run out of the building and head for the van and car.
2 of them sprey bullets accross suv with uzies.
4 shots shatter the winsheild, 2 hit Johns partner in the chest.
The suv sheers right and flips over when it hits the curb.
police car behind them, crashed.
police in the car, killed.
Johns partner. dead.
Johns suv, totaled.
Johns coffee, spilled.
cheif "John, I'm sorry... He was a good cop. Because he was your friend I'm putting you on the case.. but if you cant handle it I'm takeing you out. And your new partner is David Willaims."
Player has to put a few clues together. the van was going to fast and crashed when it ran a red light. the car made it out. lil bro was in the car.
2 guys got away from the crashed van and 1 guy was too hurt to leave
police got him and have him in custedy
Johns new partner interagates him. New partners name is David Willaims.
David "he cracked easy, They got a hid out on Millers st. probably where the rest of em are. start up the car. we'l get 2 more units and bust the place."
They drive over there with their sirens off.
Bust the place. End up haveting to kill about 10 guys and chase down another. Nice long speed chase through the city. Partner had to stay behind. Player hs to chase the bad guy down in his car.
finaly the bad guy crashes into another car. some how John gets him to talk.
they go for the next bad guy base after they finish aresting the guys in the first base. all this takes a while.
When they bust the secont base they get the info on where lil bro is hideing. in the ship yard.
When they finaly bust the ship yard it's a biog battle.. lots of cops lots of bad guys with guns.. lots of dead guys.
hero chases lil bro down. however lil bro finds his rpg and trys blowing up player.
some how player manages to kill lil bro and lil bro manages to blow a lot of stuff up.. including Johns nice car.

Kind of an end chapter there.
Somwhere while all of that was happening Johns Sister walked and talked to John. something to get player attached to sister and feel protective. and something also to say his new partner is a lot like their dad was. and also that she missed here mom and dad and says something about how they died. Lets call lil sis Cathy.

While in hospital you get more camera views.
And wite letters at bottum. day 1 day 2 day 3 etc etc.
Day 1. Cathy comes for a visit along with David.

They have nice chatt.. player doesnt talk much.. seeing as how he has some kind of tube down his throught.

So they have a nice chatt and Cathy talks with David a bit. Davit admires John some for getting blown up and liveing.
Glad he got the job done no matter what.

so.. on day 4 some wired crome dome comes in and sits on johns bed.
wakes john up and talks to him for a bit.
Crome Dome is a rather nice bad guy.
hes very dangerus and very smart.. however he has no mannor of loyalness. He workks for whoever pays best. if the cops pay him enough hill tell them everything about tha bad guy and even help catch him.

So he says something like
"Wake up dear boy.. you've got a lot of work to do. better get well soon. We have your sister.. Cathy is her name I believe. My enmployer feels you would make a rather nice foe. He is always up for a chalange. When I explaind to your parnter that I work for the highest bidder he kindly gave me his walet in exchange for his life and Cathys well being.. Even I am suprised how much he carrys with him. however with the money he provided I cant garentee Cathys well being for more then a week. So. If I were you I would rest up quickly. no harm will come to you nore Cathy.. that is.. if you show up within the next 2 weeks.
You have no reason to worry about her. Though I work for the highest bider I will keep my word. And this is what I have to say. With the money David provided Cathy will be taken cair of for the next week. After that her stay will not be as enjoyable. If or when you come I would seggest you come alone. My enployer has insisted I place a bomb with Cathy as meens of controlling you. weather you live or die meens nothing to me. Cathy wil be released when you are dead. Or.. when my employer is dead.
You have 2 weeks to attack my employer. Come Alone!."

When the player finaly gets up and reads the letter he go's after the big bro. The letter tells him where the bad guy is. To find him the player realy has to read road signs and navigate his way around town to find the place.