Starting out as an experiment in story telling, this itty bitty installment is a prelude to what will likely be more stories to come.
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I must confess even if this is just a freaking prelude to some story. There is no plot at all and nothing to do ecxept follow what the screen says. No puzzles, nothing. It has lots of texture bugs and other bugs, like for instance the poison stops working after death. The texture for the inventory is screwed up as well. Another thing is that you give no description for what the story is supposed to hold, neither here or in the description box for the story.
This mod needs way more work than what has already been done here.