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You awoke with a strange disease. Your only memories were walking to the room. You have to escape, but don't die on the way of course...
Not very good, it is functional, but it's a very weak custom story. Lots of cheap jumpscares, and it only lasts under 5 minutes, very bland as well, not recommended.
Positives:
-Nice mapping, to be honest
Negatives:
-Almost nonexisting storyline
-Cheap scares
-Poor puzzles
Storyline: ✕
Very poor. Few notes scattered around, and the "story" was cliché as hell. 2/10
Level design: ✔
Yes, some of the areas could have had more details, etc. but otherwise mapping was very solid throughout the mod. 7/10
Puzzles: ✕
Keys and keys + one quest to unlock a cabinet with a dagger which was super difficult because of no hints. 3/10
Scare factor: ✕
Not scary that much. Some areas gave me some creeps, but overused lame scares made me lose all the frightening. 3/10
Overall: ✕la
I would not recommend this story to those, who look a mod with a storyline / scares / overall a scary experience.
Score: 3,75 = 4/10 - Below Average
Okay, so I played the Final Hours Redux but couldn't find where to rate it. So I rated it here. I thought it was pretty good but a little too short. I can't wait for the other mods!
Let's see here..
-No Story (your cousin is changing, cool)
-No Puzzles (except one Acid puzzle, which is already done for you)
-No Actual scares (the "scares" in this had nothing to do w/ the story)
-Repeated Notes just wrote differently (I mean by, you constantly told us that the cousin was turning into a monster and makes gurgling noises)
-Jump Scare Galore (believe it or not, people don't get scared by them)
-The Lighting could be better (there was a LOT of light and I rarely used my lantern)
-The Atmosphere could be better (add some particles, even fog can help)
The story started out decent. Up until the part where you pick up a note that reads how your cousin is "changing" into a Grunt. After that, it was non-stop jump-scare galore.
However, it seems like you have the potential to make a better custom story. I'll be looking forward to your future projects if you make any.
I agree, it's good for a first story but sad thing is, I can't find the story anywhere...
Positives:
- Level design is actually decent for a first story
- Creativity
- A few puzzles
Negatives:
- Only 2-3 scares and all of them pathetic jumpscares
- Where is the story? A description and after credits but that's it
- Almost no puzzles
- Don't give us notes telling us where we need to go
- Crowbar is working as a key
- Only two monsters in the entire story and both of them easy to avoid
- No music, particle effects, a few details but not enough of them
- Every map is a minute long at most
- Overuse of supplies, especially since there are almost no danger
- A dungeon with 2 cells and that's it?
What to think about:
- Create a deeper story! I found one single note in the entire story with some information about the mansion only 3 feet from the ending door, come on :s
- You have almost no puzzles and giving us notes telling us where to go is making it even easier than it already is. Add more quests, more puzzles, more challange!
- First time I'm saying this I think, but you underused monsters! I actually have a tutorial about how to make the monsters walk around, if that's what you don't know because you only had 2 monsters and they didn't move at all untill I was close enough and they heard me
- You can add some jumpscares IF they make sense! Build up the athmopshere, add scary sounds, scary events, monster encounters, scary music etc, etc. No matter what, don't overuse jumpscares. Even if they make sense.
- Add music
Conclusion:
The story is okay to be from a new author. I dislike the fact that you give us personal notes like "hey hey this is my first story" and tell us where to go almost all the time, but you do have a decently good level design and creativity so I have hope for you. Good luck with future stories!
4/10 - Okay