mp_dr_away [Update 2] addon - BraXi's Death Run Mod for Call of Duty 4: Modern Warfare

Nice first map your having here bud!
Pros:
-Nice atmosphere and theme (especially for a first map)
-Creative and fun gameplay
-Pretty detailed
-Thought out endrooms.
Cons:
-Map .ff file size is pretty huge
-Some parts are a bit bugged to jump on (especially the pole jumps)
-Map is too hard for beginners (and noobs like me) when the server uses default speed settings
-Some Traps are a bit generic

Anyhow dispite the cons, this map is pretty decent for a first map and I hope to see more maps from you! If you need help with map design or scripting then add me on steam: Pablo Discobar

Nice map but hard for begginers.

Definitely one of the best maps(if not even the best) of 2017!

Positive stuff:
-Love the theme and the fact that you used some details to make the atmosphere even more natural (The map has vibes of some old favorites, but at the same time it's completely new and has awesome feeling)
-Nice amount of patches used
-The 2nd part of the map is one of the best parts about the map
-The secret is nicely fitted in the map( but its faster than normal way so it will be abused to avoid traps*FIX*)
-The activator place goes throught the jumpers environment and isn't floating besides it

Negative stuff:
-annoying musics (file size)xD
-Knifing kills you in sniper room
-traps are quite boring
-some of the rooms are quite boring

What to fix:
-wooden pole jumps ( you can cut them from normal brushes to prevent the buggy effect)
-The first big bounce between the islands is too hard for beginners( maybe make a teleport for beginners that takes like 5secs to teleport or so?)
-The slide (make the slide from terrain or curved patches and try different angles to prevent getting stuck)
-The bounce from the cave before moving platform is way too hard for beginners(make them a separate way or edit the part)
-The last bounce is again too hard for beginners(add a separate way for them or edit the path)

To make players like the map even more you should consider testing to play the map trought like a noob. The whole map should be able to be finished using little if no strafes. When you're testing the map use the default speeds g_speed 190 and dr_jumpers_speed 1.0 . The map is very good for a first map! I hope to see more maps from you and I'll be happy to help mapper like you.