I woke up another dark and nasty night. Was it even night? Don't know. The only thing I could tell for sure, 'twas pretty dark in there. I was locked in a small prison cell. The man next cell was crying as his soul was leaving his weakened body. What will I do? Wait for death as that guy? No. The only thing I'll do, is everything to GET OUT ALIVE...
Here's a 2/10 just for making a map. It isn't a good story, and when people are trying to tell you the problems, you seem to get offended and give some lame excuse, or say that it isn't a problem. Stop acting like it's fine the way it is, take advice and fix the errors, or just don't respond with your attitude. Don't know how this has an 8.