Comments - instantloser

While I do not have Counter-Strike,
I've often seen my bro win.
I think it's something I won't like,
Although my mind is open.

I might not use one beta key,
But if I had another,
I would learn and maybe see
If I could beat my brother.

I thought this was very good, since the only problems I found are small. The worst glitch was getting stuck in slow motion at one point; I had to reload a save. For a laugh, try looking straight up, holding W, and spamming Q. Wait, no: the worst glitch was jumping onto a train just to find out you aren't supposed to do that and getting stuck, floating, on void-flypaper until the next train squishes you.

I haven't finished yet, but I have some suggestions for improvements, if you plan to update. The textures all look really flat and samey. Try adding bump mapping and whatnot. Also try to avoid large perfectly flat areas in your maps. Break them up with random junk or dirt decals. Also, try using colored lights as described here: Developer.valvesoftware.com. The lights I noticed were all white. Lastly, the enemies are rather boring to fight. They don't talk, they're omnicient, they all look the same, and they all have the same tactic: chase and shoot. I could not get past certain places without lowering the difficulty to easy. You probably know all this already.