Reviews - evan99m

I absolutely loved this custom story. Everything you make is always amazing. The story was immersing, there were no cheap jumpscares, and the level design was awesome. There were great puzzles, exceptional voice acting, and there were so many unique aspects that you added. The crafting elements and hint system were genius. I love how you are able to make a whole new short game in every custom story. The only thing I didn't like was how at some points, you would know exactly what your next step was, or even what your next few steps are. It was easy to piece together the next few things that you had to do after finding the magnet, and that's not a bad thing. The annoyance for me came when I had to do a lot of running around with nothing happening in between to complete the next few tasks. I wish the puzzles and item using areas had been designed closer together, as I became very impatient when I knew what I had to do but it took a while for me to get to where I had to do it. Other than this, the mod was outstanding. Please don't stop making custom stories, and I can't wait to see the sequel for this!

I'm shocked this map has such a high rating. How can you say you won't throw naked bodies in my face in the tutorial, yet you do it anyway? This map has the most annoying jumpscares I have ever seen in a full conversion. Don't pose your map to be something it's not. The only reason I gave it a 3/10 was because the first part at least got better at the end, and had decent boss fights, an interesting story finish, and better timing. But when I was literally given what you said you wouldn't give in the second part, I'd had enough. If you guys like cheap scares, this is the map for you. If you're looking for a well designed map with few bugs, very smooth enemy encounters, a great storyline, and amazing pacing, search elsewhere.

Crashed when entering the cave after cutting my hand, leaving no saves and starting me at the beginning. Will try one more time, and will update my review if it works. If I don't update this, well, you know what happened.

UPDATE: Not even wasting my time after reading the comments. Why would you make a mod that requires a computer significantly better than required to play the original game? Completely moronic.

Almost everything about this story was spot-on. The pacing was excellent. Not once did I feel like something was out of place, nor did any puzzles get in the way of my experience. The custom mobs were also very well done, and made the story very unique. The map design was also perfect, as even though the basic city was used, you customized it to fit your story, along with the fact that everything else appeared original. The story line was very interesting and made me want to keep playing. The jump scares were extremely well done, and honestly could not have been any better in my opinion, as you had the perfect combination of tension and actual scares. This would have been a 10 if the ending was done better. Now before I tell you why I didn't like the ending, I first want to note that I have no problem with sad or disappointing endings. In fact, I even prefer them in horror games. That wasn't the case in your ending, but rather that it was very abrupt, unexpected, and left too much detail out of the story line. Obviously in some cases detail is better left out, however I don't think that is how your story should have ended, at least based on how you ended it. I think it rather should have continued a bit further. Maybe a whole final scene could have been added, or maybe the player could have arrived back at the mansion they started in, and then were brought through the corridors while a voice over played. Or maybe something spooky, like right after your son comes running in, the monster appears again, finalizing with the story ending just like that. Anything along those lines would have earned a 10 from me, however, the ending just seemed too abrupt. Other than that, everything was superb. I hope to see more stories from you! :)