My First Model - Sig Pauer 239 (P239) Thread

Hey this is my first model, tell me what you think... Tell me changes i need to do to it. (I KNOW, TEXTURE, BUT BESIDES THAT.)

big ol' red X

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overall shape looks okay, smoothing groups look a bit funky...

post up some wireframe shots and i will give you a better crit

LOL! I guess that modelling tutorial came in handy then, Chrunchy?

Hehe Yep! I just followed the chamfer and mesh smooth and vertex tutorials on that site, and i had to get a picture of a p239, and trace it and mesh smooth, and edit vertex, and chamfer.... god.... took alot of time lol...

- Edited By CrunchyBlack On Sat 31st, Jan 2004 @ 9:40:30pm

SHaRD wrote: overall shape looks okay, smoothing groups look a bit funky...

post up some wireframe shots and i will give you a better crit

okay.. doin it now

- Edited By CrunchyBlack On Sat 31st, Jan 2004 @ 9:42:03pm
- Edited By CrunchyBlack On Sat 31st, Jan 2004 @ 9:42:33pm

[IMAGE] <--- WireFrame

[IMAGE] <-- Original Gun

Theres the wireframe, exactly positioned to the right side of the gun.

- Edited By CrunchyBlack On Sat 31st, Jan 2004 @ 9:48:13pm

- Edited By CrunchyBlack On Sat 31st, Jan 2004 @ 9:53:09pm
- Edited By CrunchyBlack On Sat 31st, Jan 2004 @ 9:53:33pm

Can't see the pic

Click [image] to see which one you want....

- Edited By CrunchyBlack On Sat 31st, Jan 2004 @ 9:54:44pm

Freewebs doesn't allow hotlinking. Most of the gun is alright, but where the barrel is looks weird.

in wireframe, or normal? its perfect in normal... yea in wireframe, it does look 'awkward'. But hey, its my first model.. so i aint worried

The image doesn't work.

omg.... WE SAID THAT CRAP BEFORE, BUT HERE, STOP WHINING .. lol

www.freewebs.com/crunchyblack07/p239_firstmodel.jpg (original)

www.freewebs.com/crunchyblack07/p239_wireframe_sideshot.jpg (wireframe)

you gotta chamfer the edges doodie , THE EDGES!!!

When your gonna make fun of my models, give me replies like Thragg... just dont criticize it, and dont tell me any way of making it better... Thanks Thragg, ill chamfer tha edges....

I HATE PEOPLE WHO CRITICIZE OTHER PEOPLES MODELS, AND DONT GIVE THEM TIPS ON HOW TO MAKE IT BETTER.

Hey calm down Crunch-E. What your saying is like saying to a Food Critic: "Don't critisize my food until you become a Chef!".

No, im saying "I dont care if you make fun of it, joke about it, bad edges, i dont care, as long as you give me tips on how to improve it."

if you are gonna make fun of my model, atleast tell me how to improve it ( Chamfer Edges, Vertex Allignment, etc....)

Example

Mrpoohead100: HAHAH YOUR MODEL SUCKS, LMAO, YOU NEED TO STOP MODELING

^ That pisses me off.

Good Example

MrPooHead102: hah, your model is okay, its definately not good, but its alrite. You need to chamfer the edges, and make sure you dont mesh smooth to much.

^ Thats what kinda stuff i wanna hear.

- Edited By CrunchyBlack On Sun 1st, Feb 2004 @ 12:07:36am

but anyway, just tell me what i should do to it.. to improve it....

<dontnoticethisitstupid>still doesn't work for me...</dontnoticethisitsstupid>

edit: well, a bit sucky, but my first model wasn't better:D you were using a reference picture or something?

- Edited By BartNowciu On Sun 1st, Feb 2004 @ 2:31:46pm

No, but i made a pretty good ak-47 from a reference picture. It took me 2 hours to make though, cuz i had to mesh smooth, and chamfer, and edit the vertex's. SPECIALLY THE EDGES.

Moddb.com

(AK-47)

- Edited By CrunchyBlack On Sun 1st, Feb 2004 @ 1:06:29pm

Sort out your smoothing groups!!!