Losing his parents during the holocaust to a mad man of a doctor. You're to play as Grobuskna Vladinov, 20 years after the incident that changed his life dramatically. Grobuskna receives an unknown phone call that'll start a journey that'll twist your mind...

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Pretador Author
Pretador - - 746 comments

I'm still considering what more to add to this motel room, as I feel it is a little empty. Give me suggestions please!

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LittleDizzle
LittleDizzle - - 25 comments

maybe add some more things on the walls, like a shelf or clock

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Spe¢ter
Spe¢ter - - 1,482 comments

Yeah, that's the biggest mistake this guy makes- he makes all the rooms WAAAAY too oversized :/ Otherwise looks great, keep it up.

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Darkamo
Darkamo - - 474 comments

maybe add bathroom in the room

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Pretador Author
Pretador - - 746 comments

There is a bathroom already actually. If you see it is like a corridor or cut of at the left, that is the entrance to the bathroom.

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SPY-maps
SPY-maps - - 2,906 comments

i think this room looks just as it should, there is more then enough detail in it. More stuff would make walking around probably also difficult.
i just would leave it like it is, and should you still want to add something as rubble or something then decals are always very handy for that,

much success,
Leon

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Mateos
Mateos - - 501 comments

The player should be able to navigate in levels, not look at its feet to see if he can walk or not ^^'

Your shot already shows a very detailed room, with a nice lighting, and it's a motel: if you put too much stuff, sure people will steal little things :D

In my opinion, it's already nice. Maybe dispatch more decals on floor (or dunno if the path from the right to the door at the back is meant to be like this, if you see what I mean), but already well-filled and nice looking, imho.

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Pretador Author
Pretador - - 746 comments

Thanks for the feedback! I'll add some more decals at least. I've also added a clock, some fire in the fireplace, etc---

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The motel/tourist information hut @ chapter 1

And, don't mind the flying lamp lol xP The nightstand below it got messed up during compile...