Custom story: Samantha A demo of my first custom story for Amnesia: The Dark Descent. 3 levels are made at the moment, and I'm making atleast 7 till release. You won't need Justine to play. (The story isn't very evolved yet!) The story is about a guy named Mike who wakes up in a room with only one memory left, he mistreated his girlfriend named Samatha and now she's gone. He will need to pass horrifying obstacles to find her... Please be kindly and give constuctive critisism as I need it. If you see any grammar mistake in any note, please be kind and report it to me. The music I use is various music from my favourite game, Silent Hill- 2 and 4. Please enjoy!
These are the fixes and addings that will be included in the next version of Samatha.
New version is out in a week!
Corrections:
- I found a big mistake in the 3rd map. You had to die to proceed. It's now fixed. I had to clear the map-cache and play around with the editor before I got it to work.
- Fixed some billboard lightings to look more natural.
- Correcting grammatical errors in notes.
- Added some fogs.
- Music fixes.
- Fixed some events to look more scary and natural.
- Story continuation.
- A whole new map is now to be explored.
So this is my first custom story for Amnesia that I've been working on. Please leave some criticism on what I could improve. Thank you! And remember...
So this is my first custom story that I've been working on. Please leave some criticism on what I could improve. Thank you.
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Too short, and the music is kinda obnoxious, sorry. I do like the map design however, a bit fo searching is involved to progress, I am a fan, teh enemy placements are good too. So, 3/10, just needs to be longer
Playthrough when complete!
hey i would like to know which songs you have use in the level :D? its btw awesome i loved it was a lot of fun to play it.
peace bro
OMG LOL this will be so good for pewdiepie chucking BARRELLS!!!!!! at the bro
Good Custon story, Nice design.
But!
I didnt like that the story has no story, has no background.
you are just looking for a key opens a door, looking for a key , opens a door, ETC ETC
overall nice CS
6.5/10
Thank you for your comment!
Don't worry, the story is not done yet, right now the story is not very evolved and, the project right now feels more like a "first time" test to explore how the HPL2 editor and the scripting works.
Also I will try to make more variation in the puzzles, not only key finding.
The scripts were really well made, I really liked the effort you put into the code. And, the level design was out of this world for your first custom story. Although, I got extremely bored. I ran around in circles not knowing what to do, and every scare included a monster. I found absolutley nothing to hold my interest. The custom music is terrible, it does not fit in with the environments, and overall just sounds bad. The story is terrible from what I've seen, I read about 3 notes, and I would have continued but I crashed trying to enter a door. The English was also very bad. 4/10
Thank you for your feedback!
I will try to make improvements into the scare events. Maybe some doors that blows up etc.
I disagree with you about the music! I love Akira Yamaoka's music, so that won't change I'm sorry! ;)
The story isn't finished yet, I will try to make it interesting.
I'm not from an English speaking country, so my english might not be 100%, but it is really that bad? Haha!
Where did the map exacly crash? I will take a look right now.
Anyways thank you for your comment, have a nice day!
You can make it so that i can download it from Desura...
Sorry for the late reply and thank you for your feedback. The mod will be available on Desura in a few days.