beware for once you enter the gloomy mansion you stay for ever. this is a short i mean short story but how can blame me this is my first story i would really appreciate it if you play. ps_pls put tutorials.
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Kill it with fire.
no review is needed
Oh, My goodness. I never thought I would encounter this. I'm not exactly sure what you were aiming for here. I mean this with the best of intent. From the moment I started playing, I kept hearing monster groans constantly throughout the play, yet I didn't encounter a single monster. Not once. The walls and textures were all over the place, quite literally. This is the first time I've ever had to give a bad review. Study more mods and design before you try again.
I will do this review in a different way this time because I can barley find anything positive about it and you are new so just lining up the issues will probably not help you that much.
What you need to think about for next time:
1: In-game screenshots! Don't use your phone, don't take pictures of the level editor, we want to see screenshots of your story IN AMNESIA.
2: Create a story! Don't begin working on maps before you know what your story will be about. Get an idea! You don't need a start to finish story, but at least think of the basics. Where does the character wake up/start? Why does he wake up/start there? What is his/her name?
3: Improve your level design. Seriously, you have 1000 texture glitches, walls are not correctly connected with each others, the candles are too far up and doesn't do any utility, they are rotated so some of them are inside the walls...
4: Be creative! Add details! When you have the base for your map, let your creativity flow! Add nice details, light effects, billboards, design your room in unique ways.
5: Learn how to script! This sounds very rude I know, but all monsters spawn immediately making them very easy to spot, very easy to avoid and not a slightly bit scary. You have no quests what so ever and no scares either.
Conclusion of my gameplay:
I spawned inside a very boring and uninteresting room. I heard a monster and understood that this is a rookie map immediately. I went from one room to another while avoiding the monsters without even trying to hide from them. I eventually found the exit, was forced to constantly jump and run to get passed the grass and went inside a house with only one room with a huge amount of HP potions for no reason at all. The End.
1/10 - Pointless
Take what I said into consideration and I promise you it will be better! DON'T rush and DON'T UPLOAD STORIES LIKE THIS WHEN YOU DON'T HAVE A CLUE HOW TO CREATE ONE. It take weeks up to months to complete a story, not a few hours.
Its sad to say this is awful like texture glitch, short, nonsense monster encounter and all...