This is the story of how you were brainwashed, and woke up in a place you have never seen before. All you know is, you have to escape wherever you are.
I have no idea what people see in this... This is the worst "story" I've ever played. I don't know if you are trolling or if you are serious about all the "greatness" with this cs, but let me tell you, there is nothing good about it at all.
And please, stop making lame excuses as "I'm only 12 years old". I know 12 year old kids with professional level design skills. No matter how old you are, you should never relase something like this.
Also stop blaming that you "don't see the errors" or "send me a picture of the overlapping textures". HALF the maps are nothing but overlapping textures, how the hell can you miss them? O_O
Positives:
- An attempt to create a story
- You know the basics I guess
Negatives:
- No story, notes, mementos, no description, only a few key names
- No intro, no ending
- No challange
- Nothing makes sense
- Water streams at the first room?
- What did I need the acid and the crowbar for?
- Too much supplies
- Almost no scripting at all! The only scripting you can do is key quests
- Horrible level design with 1000 texture glitches, missing walls, tourches rotated upside down and inside out
Conclusion:
You need to stop being so arrogant and take what people say into consideration. I have no idea how you can miss all the errors, they are everywhere!
Keep stories like this one to yourself as a learning experience only. Improve your level design, learn how to script and come back when you have something worth playing.
I may be a bit harsch but I hope you understand that saying that something like this is "amazing" is like an insult to the people that actually spend time to upload something great
V2:
Tried next version and sadly not much has changed. A few glitches removed, key names added, otherwise just as bad.
1/10 - Pointless
At least they could've put music
Cons ( just a few of them on the top of my head )
- The level design was poor and very glitchy
- most rooms were just for you to pass by quickly with no real purpose
- one Poofer that didn't do much
- that...water.??? enough said
- poor story with a few sentences
- no ending whatsoever?
Suggestions:
I'd suggest hitting Play at least once and you'll notice that in-game you can see most of the glitches quite accurately.
I'd also suggest building up a story beforehand and then a world around it, you'll notice that the environment will feel more useful if it serves the purpose of the story. No more useless rooms.
More scripting, maybe.
Level door after level door with nothing much in between breaks the immersiveness, not that this mod had one, but for future reference.
Bottom line: you tried, that's why this is a 2 and not a 1.
Really underwhelming. Random tiny maps spun together with a nonsensical story. Lasts about 5 minutes, not worth it.
******
Positives:
-Mapping had some potential in some areas
Negatives:
-Whole story and the "house" made no sense
-Not scary the slightest
-No music, ambient sounds or effects
-Super boring, nothing happened
People, be more clever than I and don't play this custom story.
Full review incoming in the near future.
Another generic crap custom story with bad story, bad textures, bad level design, etc.
I did not like it,I've seen better everywhere than this.
You piece of ****.. How dare you post this cs..
Too many stupid crap details around here...
You worst childish chinese!