You don´t remember anything. You just wake up in mansion (yours?). When you going to the dark corridors you see you are not alone or something weird is happening. _________________________________________ Hi this is my first mod what i have made. Hope you like it :) _________________________________________ Features- ~~Flashlight ~~Some Jumpscares ~~Monsters >:D
Interesting concept with the hallucinations, however this has was too many jumpscares, and far too frequently to make it scary in the slightest. It is also way too short. I can't say anything is really going for this other than it had potential and works as intended.
Wow.....this was.....an exercise in futility.
Scare Factor: What scare? The terror of dead pen1s in my face? Or the poofer enemies? Or the water monster that couldn't catch me if it tried?
Storyline: You wake up in a mansion. now, GTFO WASABI DAWI. So weak, so underdeveloped. It felt like there was no point.
Supply Amount: It's okay. What more is there to say?
Bugs: You have a crapload of mapping problems(i.e, big rectangular holes in the walls that enemies will see you through), as well as one flying naked dead guy that blocks a door from opening that you need to go through.
Puzzle Difficulty: Okay, you're not even trying, i'm POSITIVE of that. An Amnesia CS is nothing without at least a puzzle more simple than, "put key here hurr durr"
Final Opinion: Oh boy, this has a LOT of problems with it. Let's get the list out of the way.
-Flashlight? Why? That makes zero sense. Nor does anything else in your custom story.
-You fail it for naked dead guys. Teleporting ones, nonetheless. Not scary. AT ALL.
-Your ExtraEnglish.lang is also a fail. Nothing in there works, for once. Also, I just looked at the content of said file. And you seriously disappoint me. This is a troll CS, I swear.
-Sounds are screwed. Since when does plugging in fresh batteries equal sloshing in some oil into a lantern?
-RETARDED ENEMY PLACEMENT.
-You have a lot of maps that quite literally, you only see for three seconds. Lots of loading screens.
There's probably more stuff, but i'm too mentally tired to note them. Get your **** together, play The Dark Descent another ten times, then maybe you will understand how to make good maps.
Cool guy, he knows what he doing.
Pro's:
- A few times i jumped, particularly when the Grunt apparition disappeared and a real one was waiting round the corner! Nice!
- You show as a Modder you are capable of creating a mod and i didn't experience any bugs, except for one of the 'Flying Naked Guys' blocking a door early on.
Con's:
- Flying Naked Guys. Don't use these in mods, it really takes away from the scare factor and a person's ability to get sucked into what they are playing.
- Very short Story
- No Storyline of any kind.
- No puzzles
- No letters/dialogue to explain what's going on as you move through the mansion.
- Flashlight? What?
- Jumpscares got repetitive and boring after the first couple of times.
Conclusion:
Work on what you've already learned and the reviews people post from their, and please DON'T USE naked flying guys, it's cheap and often hated among the Amnesia Players.
Cheers
AAS.
Positives:
- For a first story, the level design is actually decently good
- A few decent scenes, like the "flashbacks" or what ever they were
- Creative at a few parts
Negatives:
- Missing ceiling at a few maps
- House floating in the air
- FLYING NAKED GUYS
- Nothing but jumpscares
- No story
- I managed to fall out of the map because I jumped on a barrel...
- Very short
- Bad grammar
- No texts, no notes, no key descriptions...
- Flashlight made no sense since the story is based on Amnesia otherwise
- Voice acting at the end made no sense and was only at the end, nowhere else
- No credits given to the creator of the batterys and flashlight
- Trollface, Thank you 4 playing, u mad, etc in the end credits. Seriously? How old are you?
Concluison:
STOP USING FLYING NAKED GUYS! No one think it's scary more than once!
It may sounds harsch, but you are not ready to upload stories yet. Work on your english file and level design skills, create a story (not only "you don't remember anything, you must escape"), don't add only jumpscares and make sure your story is free from all the easy spotted flaws and bugs before you upload it.
BUT you are creative and some parts actually surprised me, since I didn't have high hopes for this story. Take your creativity a step further, create a story line and stop using lame scares and I'm sure you can create a decent story in the future ;)
2/10 - Really bad