Black Mansion *Fixed* mod for Amnesia: The Dark Descent

I played like 10 minutes and i am almost bored to not play anymore beacuse there are a lot of cheasy jumpscares (naked guys appearing suddenly among others like that)

NAKED GUYS ARE STUPID AND OVERUSED.IF YOU EVER WANT TO GET A GOOD GRADE ON YOUR CUSTOM STORY THEN DON'T USE THEM.*CAPS LOCK OFF*
Let me give you a hint.If you want to make good custom stories that are playable, follow these instructions:
1.Never, ever use flying naked guys.
2.Make smaller maps and more decorations in them.
3.Don't make just key guests, make puzzles.
4.Write a good story. (Not, you wake up in a mansion/castle and you don't remember anything-stupid and boring)
Those are my hints.If you want to use them, use them, if not, don't use them.

I played this, i jump on my chair few times. It's short and too much stuff in one place, i mean monster and naked guys it'cool but it was compressed too much in one place. I wait for next map from you.

I have just completed this Custom Story and done a playthrough on Youtube should you wish to have a look Youtube.com
I shall now post a review on the 'review's page' regarding this CS.

Played it and...

Positives:

- For a first story, the level design is actually decently good
- A few decent scenes, like the "flashbacks" or what ever they were
- Creative at a few parts

Negatives:

- Missing ceiling at a few maps
- House floating in the air
- FLYING NAKED GUYS
- Nothing but jumpscares
- No story
- I managed to fall out of the map because I jumped on a barrel...

- Very short
- Bad grammar
- No texts, no notes, no key descriptions...
- Flashlight made no sense since the story is based on Amnesia otherwise
- Voice acting at the end made no sense and was only at the end, nowhere else

- No credits given to the creator of the batterys and flashlight
- Trollface, Thank you 4 playing, u mad, etc in the end credits. Seriously? How old are you?

Concluison:

STOP USING FLYING NAKED GUYS! No one think it's scary more than once!
It may sounds harsch, but you are not ready to upload stories yet. Work on your english file and level design skills, create a story (not only "you don't remember anything, you must escape"), don't add only jumpscares and make sure your story is free from all the easy spotted flaws and bugs before you upload it.

BUT you are creative and some parts actually surprised me, since I didn't have high hopes for this story. Take your creativity a step further, create a story line and stop using lame scares and I'm sure you can create a decent story in the future ;)

I want to play this :D