The Warriors In Black is a mod that takes place in the Warhammer 40k realm. Armed with your trusty bolt pistol and combat knife, Brother Markus swears an oath to the emperor during his aproach to the Maldavian sector. On a mission to eliminate the enemies of the Impierium of man and puge the sector of the foul Xeno's currently hold up on many of the planets in the area, Markus stumbles upon a discovery that could pose a greater threat then any alien he may incounter...
To assist with improving your marine models a few observations...
You may have missed the following, I would expect to have been modelled before the chest designs(which can be easily skinned) :
belt buckle
tubes from the chest to the belt
cuffs on the sleeves
The following proportions look wrong:
Leg armor. The shins should be wider than the thighs (part of the classic marine bell bottom armor style).
Knee pads should be as wide as the thighs.
Torso, head and shoulder looks squashed horizontally.
Can I see more pictures of the hands, backpack and elbow pads as i know these can be tricky too, but can't be seen too well in this shot.
A bit more smoothing on the shoulder pads would have been nice, as you can see the angles are clearly visible in profile.
I am very glad to see you are working on new marine models BTW.
2 more missing items that I didn't notice 1st time around:
neck (between helmet and collar)
collar (between neck and chest)
Those heads look totally disconnected :/
yea i took the FakeFactory aproach and used my unsuited marine model then built the armour around him
cuffs and belt i totally frogot about along with the middle wires running along his abs
the heads look disconected from here but ive moddeled a ridgedy rubber neckcover (just cant see because of the angle of the shot)