The year is 1753, You wake up in the storage room of your dad's huge mansion, not remembering what happened. The only thing you can remember is that you started questioning your dad about what he was doing all the time. Now you need to determine what secret he has... Please tell me whats good/ what I need to get better at, I really like some feedback:)
Awesome scares in the basement, scared the **** out of me o.o
Good story and it scared me in the Secret Basement :O
Not bad, relatively short and sweet custom story with everything you want from an Amnesia story, however it's a bit short and generic, so I can't rate it high, but it is good, but nothing special.
Had some really good scares, especially in the secret basement. I am a bit confused by the ending and who exactly I was playing as.
Meh not bad but not great either... One or two very good scares but added with the one or two mistimed ones they do kind of negate each other. For me rooms were far to big and dark especially down in the basement where perhaps one or two candles would have been better. The storyline was good although short and for a first attempt is a great stepping stone...
Always good to be scared on my 50th Custom Story so thanks :)
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nice but although need more fix and also if u made another custom story try to make it more longer..but this is nice :D
For a first custom story, it's pretty good !
But you didn't manage to scare me that much. There were too many unnecessary jumpscares, especially in the Secret Basement. *SPOILER*
- In one of the room with the cow.
- After you pick up the key to the door next to the father's bedroom, cheap jumpscare on the way back.
- In the room next to the father's bedroom, same thing after picking up object. It really feels like the room was just made for this.
I like the story but it seems a bit unfinished (put piece of orb and credits rolls). Also if the father killed the son, what am I ? A ghost, a hallucination (or maybe I didn't understand the story) ?
Keep going !
For a first story, it's decent. I mean, the story is working perfectly fine. Your level design is... well, need alot of work but it's a great start and the story line is also decent but very common and pretty uncreative.
You do know how to make scares thought! You even managed to scare me, and I have played sooo many stories. At least you did that part great!
But something I really hated with this story is the lame ending. It does not even feel like an ending... you use the orb piece at the huge sanctum door and it's over... credits are rolling in. It feels unfinished and really disapointing.
5/10 - Average
Absolutely the worst custom story I've ever played. It's not even so bad it's good. It's so bad, it's worse than bad. All it is is a waste of your time, patience and attention.
Here's a video review of the mod me and my friend made:
So, to reiterate:
Pros:
-NOTHING
Cons:
-THE WHOLE DAMN FUCKFEST
0/10
NEVER AGAIN