You are Jonathan and you woke up in a foreign mansion. Whou brought you here? What happened? Try to find out a way!
Not bad. You have to carry on... :)
Perfect. The only issues that showed was the first one was a bit bland in the kitchen area notably, but other than that, honestly I didn't have any problems with these two stories, and the improvement in part 2 really does show. Excellent custom stories with two different scenarios, good puzzles and good map design, check it out.
IMO the scripts were predictable, but still intense.
The plot, well I don't think there is one per se, it was more of an escapist sort of thing.
If it was meant to be an escapist sort of then I'd say it was above average.
The find and open thing was a bit annoying as they were a bit too well hidden. Level design wasn't really that unique or cool.
The key finding and item finding thing was the most annoying thing for me, and bumped down my score.
That's it for me.
So it says "JUST A FREAKING TEST" at the end. For a test it was pretty freaking good. I do think you might have over did the jump scares but overall I really enjoyed playing this custom story. Thank you for taking the time to make it. Now on to Part 2.
Really enjoyed this one, I had a lot of fun solving those puzzles and the atmosphere was amazing. I didn't pay much attention to the story but it was a lot of fun. 10/10
PewDiePie are play this cs thats why i rate 10 :p
Jumpscares,keys,jumpscares,keys,jumpscares,keys
Nice work. I did think you used the jumpscares too much. And there was some open space every now and then. The story itself wasn't hard or boring and it was short. There were no puzzles, but some keys were well hidden and took me a bit to find.
**SMALL SPOILER**
The most nerve wracking part was being chased by the Brute after the Prison key. I can't stand the Brute in chase mode.
However, I liked it.
I especially loved part 2, it proves to me that your improving on your mapping, I just don't like the lack of music. (mainly in part 1)
And btw the history of the guillotine is correct but, the device model is actually called a "swinging pendulum blade" lol
Utter crap...went WAY overboard with the jumpscares...did not flinch one bit. Noob.