S L U D G E My map for the TWGL mapping competition
this Sludge is better and i can't take it
The maps path is pretty nice and challenging but at one point when I thought I was able to jump I was able to make the jump from the waste basin to the broken bridge part but then I always fell down so that is a bit deceiving and it should be so that I cannot make the jump so the bridge part should be a little further away and no invisable wall be there to prevent the player from going from the bridge to the elevator, that invisable wall should not be necessary. So that is what I would change about the second map. Also I had an issue with when I died the prologue kept playing on in the first map. As far as detailing I think very ok. Also I would split the second map into 2 maps as there is a very long loading time when you die in the second map. My final point is that I wish it was a bit longer because I did enjoy these maps and the puzzle elements.
Played this one on Gamebanana a while back and it's pretty good, especially for a beginner mapper. There are some faults in the maps and the custom models seem to have been attacked with MS Paint but aside from my issues, the maps are nicely made and detailed. It's pretty challenging too which is good.