The scourge of Chaos arrived on a new world: Ziongane. This world was very close to the planet Ultramar, home of the great Space Marines chapter, the Ultramarines. The Imperial garrison on Ziongane, the 51st Battalion, were no match for the daemonic forces, and thus evacuated the planet before the Ultramarines arrived. Viewing the situation from their Battle Barge called The Impetus, Admiral Jaenus, along with Inquisitor Vanri, decided that there was only one way to cleanse the world of this taint, and thus the world was decimated in atomic fire. Deep in the Daedalus System, a home for the Zionganeans was found. The planet, Tirea IV. They moved there post-haste, with Admiral Jaenus in lead of the escort. However, this system is far from peaceful, and the new Tirean populus began creating the Emperor's war-machines again. At the same time, Admiral Jaenus received a distress signal from the Imperial Lunar-Class Cruiser, the Argus. It is the 41st Millenium, and there is only WAR.
Some models produced by Lonehunter and Kiory.
That looks wicked sick D: keep it up.
Quite good basic shape. There are various references for them, but generally speaking your shoulder pads are too broad from the front view. The rims usually is like letter L, not like |_ (same length of 'arms' of the rim). Other than that the area between belt and breastplate is taller.
Right now it looks quite 'boxy'.
Hope you like critique, don't get me wrong - i like your models actually.
Hey not at all, critique is always welcome, as long as it isn't blatantly obvious that something is "WIP" or not finished yet.
Those comments do my head in! And also people saying to turbosmooth it. No point :P
No, i meant 'boxy' i meaning 'not tall enough and wide', not that you should smooth it to the oblivion.
I'm commenting just the basic shape. I know it's still wip.
Lol, the turbosmoothing was directed at someone else who have commented in the past.
I am working on cleaning the model up currently and already looks a ton better, thanks for the crits. ;)
Proceed.