I'm just going to copy paste what i said to another modder.
Please Improve your skills. A lot more. To aid you, I will tell you what needs to be improved in this image.
-Lighting
-YOU NEED LIGHTING. Lighting also needs to have an actual origin, such as an observation room, or a wall light. It should not be randomly placed in the middle of space in a room. Light doesn't just come out of nowhere in real life, and it shouldn't in a videogame. Developer.valvesoftware.com
-Textures
-Textures need MAJOR improvement. At the moment, they are very repetitive and boring. Spice it up a bit by adding more textures, bits of textures that are at different angles and distances from the walls. DO NOT PUT A WALL TEXTURE ON THE FLOOR and fix misaligned textures. Developer.valvesoftware.com
-Room design
-Not much to comment on in this regard from the screenshot, however, this chamber is too large. You may say that the largeness is required, but it is not. You can keep the same puzzle with a smaller room, if you just reorganise it. Often making it smaller also improves the layout of the puzzle, making it much more rewarding to solve and also adds to the feeling, as demonstrated in many great maps, a slightly claustrophobic feeling.
These are just 3 things that should be changed, and by doing these things, your mapping skills and acceptance of your level will greatly increase. At the moment, this "Map" looks utterly terrible and boring. Even if it is ust a tst for gameplay, make it look interesting if you are going to release a screenshot.
I know it is just a test, and I can see that as well, but if you are trying to test a machanic and decide to show it off to people, you should clean up images so they look godd and advertise your work at a higher standard.
You could probably benefit GREATLY from using the Portal 2 chamber editor and play a ton of the community levels to get a better grasp on what you enjoy and dislike about custom made test chambers. If all your wanting is to create test chambers, opening Hammer seems like a misstep in the wrong direction.
Oh my. This looks just awesome.
I hope that was sarcasm.
Indeed it was my good sir!
This is probably one of the worst things I have ever seen.
I'm just going to copy paste what i said to another modder.
Please Improve your skills. A lot more. To aid you, I will tell you what needs to be improved in this image.
-Lighting
-YOU NEED LIGHTING. Lighting also needs to have an actual origin, such as an observation room, or a wall light. It should not be randomly placed in the middle of space in a room. Light doesn't just come out of nowhere in real life, and it shouldn't in a videogame. Developer.valvesoftware.com
-Textures
-Textures need MAJOR improvement. At the moment, they are very repetitive and boring. Spice it up a bit by adding more textures, bits of textures that are at different angles and distances from the walls. DO NOT PUT A WALL TEXTURE ON THE FLOOR and fix misaligned textures. Developer.valvesoftware.com
-Room design
-Not much to comment on in this regard from the screenshot, however, this chamber is too large. You may say that the largeness is required, but it is not. You can keep the same puzzle with a smaller room, if you just reorganise it. Often making it smaller also improves the layout of the puzzle, making it much more rewarding to solve and also adds to the feeling, as demonstrated in many great maps, a slightly claustrophobic feeling.
These are just 3 things that should be changed, and by doing these things, your mapping skills and acceptance of your level will greatly increase. At the moment, this "Map" looks utterly terrible and boring. Even if it is ust a tst for gameplay, make it look interesting if you are going to release a screenshot.
Omg guys its a test I can see the bridge and diversity vent tho good job
I know it is just a test, and I can see that as well, but if you are trying to test a machanic and decide to show it off to people, you should clean up images so they look godd and advertise your work at a higher standard.
and Guys I am not a good mapper but I'm working on it
Then please get some help before you post pictures of your work.
I'm trying to... but so far nothing...
I'm cofused is this a warehouse simulator ? ? ?
You've put out a single sentence plea for modders to rally and help but forgot to tell us what you desire your mod to become.
Just noticed the blurb saying "10 test chambers"
You could probably benefit GREATLY from using the Portal 2 chamber editor and play a ton of the community levels to get a better grasp on what you enjoy and dislike about custom made test chambers. If all your wanting is to create test chambers, opening Hammer seems like a misstep in the wrong direction.