Patience is a custom story about a boy and a girl. It includes voice acting, and custom music. Scripting is innovative. Requires patch 1.3
The creator simply trolled most of the people here, lol!!, the maps are well detailed and the story is good... and it has the best ending ever!... the gameplay,the stuff with interacting with objects is really good and new!,the music is good!, but... i don't give a 10/10 because... i liek if i cri everitiem...
This custom story is descent in terms of level design, scripting, voice acting and music. But it's the fact that this custom story is pretty empty otherwise, if you look at the storyline and length of the custom story.
I know that this custom story is meant to be a joke in general, but if you're gonna do so at least make it funny in some way. You were instead building up a story that seemed promising for a detailed and nice custom story. And then in the ending you just run it into the ground and the "Liek if u kry every tim" just made me "Come on...".
I don't have much else to say, since I didn't find any errors in the levels themselves. The scripting is pretty sweet and the level design (despite being short af) is quite good. But this is very empty and I didn't expect this from you.
Like mentioned previously, you could've put more effort into it despite being a joke cs. I would recommend putting in some jokes, filling in better what the cs was firstly meant to be. It would do good since this particular storyline isn't really one to joke around with.
SwedishGames
Decent for what it was, couldn't finish it cause of a bug though.
So... I don't get if this custom story is trying to take itself seriously or not, considering the note it ends on, kinda just kills everything else you've just experienced in the custom story, even then the story itself seems very generic and doesn't really expand on anything, just boy and girl, in love, girl feints and dies, guy is.. indifferent? Lol, very weird custom story, the best way to describe it is an abstract shitpost.
Completed this story, and oh man, was I disappointed.
Story: ✕
I first thought that the storyline would be cliché, but it turned out to be quite interesting. Very sad and depressing in fact. You might be thinking that if the storyline was quite interesting, then why did I give it just 2? Well, the reason can be found below. = 2/10
Mapping: ⁓
Not the best, but not bad at all. Very basic. = 6/10
Scare factor: N/A
Not gonna say anything, because this wasn't supposed to be scary.
Atmosphere: ✔
This was the strongest part of this story. At some points the atmosphere made me feel sad, and the sadness and depressiveness was touchable. = 8/10
Puzzles: ✕
None. = 1/10
Texture glitches: ✔/ N/A
Found actually no texture glitches at all- not that common in stories. However, due to the shortness of this CS, I'm not gonna take that as a part of the final score. Otherwise 10/10.
Music: ✔
Sad and depressing piano music, throughout almost the whole mod. Got a little boring in the end the end tho, and no other music was found. = 7/10
Creativity: ⁓
Story of boy and a girl is a little bit cliche, and the mapping was very basic. Not that much of a negative though. = 6/10
Overall:
I loved the gameplay- how you can interact with things was superb.
However, there was a H-U-G-E disappointment. I was finishing the storyline which was pretty touching- the girl had died and the boy was missing her. The girl asked, if the boy would love the girl forever- boy said no.
Then, the girl died in the yard.
"I was about to say that i'll love you 5ever. Liek if u crie every tiem"
Are you fu*king kidding me? Or even serious? Why did you ruin great cs with some childish, non-funny stuff from the internet? If you would not have put that there (which I REALLY hope you shouldn't have done), the overall score would have been higher. Very, very dumb and not even close to funny.
If you would NOT have put that stupid lame s*it in the end, the story's score would have been given 7,1 ⁓ 7.
However, the overall score is
5,7 ⁓ 6.
piece of **** ...
******** ...
meaningless ...
full of bugs ...
countless glitch ...
hard to undrestand ...
**** THIS **** !!!!
Nul et decevant. Franchement, je me suis ennuyé. C'est vraiment dommage. Faites mieux la prochaine fois ( si il y en a une ). Rien à dire d'autre. :/
Ahh man that one made me laugh. Take a 7/10
Man, this is soooo depressing, but it was very enjoiable :) I Really liked the level design and the custom walls, luckly i am a very patient person.
As I said on the frictional games forum This was actually a good concept.
Loved the detail and music put into it, also the huge creativity and min ***** with the puzzles xD It doesn't even feel like amnesia anymore.
I also loved the end. That plot twist tho