Hello everyone, this is Rockspirit here, and I just finished my last custom story "Out Of Time". This story is talking about a time traveling machine. The scientific amnesic who discovers the machine learns that it is a time traveling machine. Understanding that this is not his home, he decides to enter the machine and stop the doctor who created it to prevent chaos. Compared to "Trapped In My Mind" or "Pewdiepie's house", I Worked hard on the level design, it's more concrete, more extensive, but it still a short custom story. I hope you'll enjoy it, it's been a while i'm working on it, so please don't be so mean :).
Excellent work on this one. Running through the different environments was a new experience. Though, I would like to address a couple of small issues, as well as a tip to those who may have been stuck during the 'large' world.
First off, bumping into invisible walls during the snow area was a bit frustrating, so I would recommend beefing it up with more foliage, etc. to make it a bit more obvious that I can't progress in a certain direction.
Secondly, cleaning up the mementos as they are fulfilled would be a nice feature.
Third, autosaving during regular intervals
Lastly (this may concern others in regards to making it through the large world), some objects that float in the water of the big world - you cannot land on. The reason I had been stuck: Once I fell through a particular object, I labelled any similar objects as invisible. This, however, was not the case. Trial and error will prove that. The big world was cool, but it's hard to tell where to go, sometimes. You have to feel around for climb events.