Find Out what happened to you in the past. Go back to where you came from and find out who is behind all this! And be careful in the dark corners of the castle, because there lurks A TERRIBLE EVIL!
Positives:
- Level design is actually decent. Not the best I've seen but not bad
- Quests are also decently good
- Creativity
Negatives:
- Levels feels repetitive
- The story is okay, but feels unfinished
- The ending felt so rushed and not very logical
- A few more scares and more music would be nice
- Bug in the Living room. A brute was standing in the corridor doing absolutely nothing. Not even chasing me
Conclusion:
All in all, it's a step better than Only Fear 1. It's good to see that you are learning and improving your level editor skills.
To me, the story felt so... Well, I don't know, not very satisfying I guess. It was a story about some sort of a hallucination potion but it never really came to a conclusion exactly what happened afterwards. I don't even know who I played as.
The ending felt rushed. I unlocked a door, ran upstairs and suddenly it's over? No outro scene or anything, just over.
Your level design is actually good though. You just need to variate more. Most of the story just looked more or less the same.
6/10 - Decent
Good custom story i was pretty much scared every time and the custom music was pretty much really scary creeps me out a lot of time. Some of the hidden hole or keys they were really hard to find you should give some hints for some of it. There are some glitches in this custom story.
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*1 Glitch - When I was collecting oil to make the lever work I press the jar in my inventory and try to put it in one of the oil leak i found or something like that but it says you cant do that or use that. Then i just tried to put the jar in the lever and it randomly worked please fix that for the other players.
*2 Glitch - When you pull the lever and then when you were running because the monster is chasing you the monster was stuck in the invisible wall or something ? please fix this for the other players.
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Good custom story. Good Luck and Good Job. :D
:D XVaLeNzUeLaX :D