My Amnesia Custom story Test (DEMO) mod for Amnesia: The Dark Descent

ok, new creaator,
Here is what i think;
It is short as you mentioned.
And it has barely any detail yet.
To be honest, you should not have added it here just now.
It is just a little too empty without any scripts \ events.
You knpw the very basics, that is good.
Now you need to focus on mapping.
then scripting, try to learn from other stories.
Also, entities like trees and grass should ALWAYS be NON-COLLIDABLE. just untag it.
Add these [br] after a line of text, makes it more readable ;) free hint there.
Also, the outside was bride and didnt have any background which makes the bad blur.
the inside was empty, but the standards were there.
Add some text to the keys\description.
Also hints\quest should be added in a later stadium.
overall, it is not yet much, but try adding updates if you have at least a couple maps, detailed and have some scripts in it.
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DnALANGE,
ps, be free to check out some of the mods here from great creators, you will learn from that.
Keep up the work!

Welcome to the community! Beware of the few trolls here though. Good luck with this mod and your future mods too!

It's cool to see a new cs creator :)