The year has changed to 1888, when Gregory suddenly wakes up in Mr.Austin's mansion in the New years eve. You will have to go through Mr.Austin's cruel experiment, and discover along the way, how madness can overtake a person easily..
Positives:
- Good level design
- Creepy atmosphere
- Creativity
- More than one ending
Negatives:
- The classic "you wake up somewhere unkown". You did it well, but it's still lack of originallity
- Some puzzles were a bit hard to solve
- Drill did not have a description or name when it was fixed
- Really annoying when you force the player to turn around and look at the chasing monster
- Possible to speed run the story in 2-4 minutes (read conclusion)
Conclusion:
For a first story it's actually really good! The level design is not unique, but you definitely spent a lot of time on it.
The story, despite the lack of originallity, turned out to be really well made as well.
Good job!
On a little side note. Please, don't force the player to look at the chasing monster! I was running forward, the character automaticly turned around and I ended up running towards the monster instead.
And when I encountered the curtain bug, I eventually tried to bug myself to the next part of the story using barrels. It turned out I was able to barrel bug me so much so I could speedrun the story in around 2-4 minutes when doing the escape ending. The whole glitching through doors using barrels can be done in more or less every story so it's not really your fault, I just wanted to point it out.
7/10 - Good
Not bad. Interesting gameplay and puzzles.
Really good custom story, one critique I had is I think you should give a hint about that knights puzzle, like on a note of something, it's not obvious whatsoever, and I had to watch a walkthrough to figure out what to do. But other than that it was great, good map design, good puzzles, good events, great experience.
It has impressive challenges and very good puzzles and multi endings which is always a plus, awesome work on this custom story.
Offers both horror and good puzzles. The storyline is simple but impressive. Some puzzles were a bit challenging, but got through them after a while. Two ending are another positive thing about this CS. It looks simple at first and appears not to be a good custom story, but after s while you realise it is a good custom story.
A fairly cliche mod, but a couple creative twists to make this an enjoyable session.
A good little custom story with some good qualities including
- new interesting puzzles
- good level design
- scares
- a story
- alternate endings
pretty good
I just ended this CS and I have to say, that it's very good custom story. Not too short, not too long and it had really great moments. And it didn't have jumpscares. (That's very important for me) :D
8/10
Nice level design, funny puzzles. Job well done for the first timer!
GJ