You are a scientist named John Vendetta. You were kidnapped with other Black Mesa personel after The Black Mesa Incident. The kidnappers tried to get from you critical information about the Resonance Cascade and then kill you. Thanks to the HEV suit, it seems like you are the only one who survived and you need to find out who's behind all of this. It's time for REVENGE.
Not bad but needs some more attention to detail both on ground as well as on the walls. Vary the textures a bit. How about some sort of designated parking spots for the boxes below. Imagine it just like some sort of parking deck for cars. White or yellow lanes might work nicely here.
The lamps up on top could get connected with one another per black cable brushes and ultimately to some power generator.
I just decided that cables are in the ceiling and walls but i think i will change that since you don't need to hide cables in a place like this.
Thank you for your opinion.