Forgotten - A Custom Story You just woke up from a deep sleep. Your memories are shattered, you can't remember what happened before you fell asleep. Everything you have, is a short letter. A letter, from your former self.
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I did not like this story that much. It's very short, have a low variation of quests and just isn't working very well. Sad, since the level design is really great for a first story.
1: The first map quest (to unlock the door to the next level) is hard. Actully, I could barley figure it out even thought the note gaved me a hint. I also found a wall not connected with the other walls in the storage.
2: The padlock in the second map is messed up. It's conflicting with the door and just doesn't look very well placed. And just dissapears if you unlock it.
3: The brute event was not well maded. He spawned for no reason so I ran in to a cell. He never went away so I decided to crawl away from him. I touched a disable trigger a few seconds later and he went away infront of my face. "How did you escape the brute?" "Magic *oink oink*"
4: The one and only grunt event was not well maded either. He refused to leave untill all the gamesounds suddenly died out. I saved and exit the story and all my sounds came back. I continued with the story and he was gone... also magic of some sort I guess
5: The story itself is just... well, it's pretty bad. Hallucinations, monsters, flashbacks... everything is used only 1-2 times during the whole story. The story is not consistent.
I did like your level design thought. And you are creative here and there. + You added your own item.
4/10 - Okey