In Fear of the Darkness you play as Fabian Giles; a regular person with a regular life. He is 26 years old and like to party, ( no this info won't help you in the mod, but I tell you it anyways ) but then one day his life changes drasticly.
I wus bored.
More blood! :D
Joke.
Anyway, it's atmospheric enough.
The walls are dirty, but not the floors. Doesn't seem right.
good point.
pretty cool!
cool!!
This is currently the main menu background, btw.
If this is the main menu, then I suggest put as much detail into it as possible, this should be a rough concept at most.
Lol might put a graffitti or something there, it's a public toilet... so it shouldn't have that much detail.
Also, I think that if I put more detail there it would just be too cluttered.
But thanks for constructive critisism, it's well appreciated, and I need it for learning more.