It consists of a character that falls down a hole and makes friend with a spirit. Together they face puzzles and dangers to escape from the hole.
1) The design. Oh my goshrtpojrtnpinrt! I have never seen more twisted and awesome at the same time design in an amnesia custom story EVER! This is probably the story with the best design in the whole world of amnesia! I really don't know man, but you did a perfect job on the design part!
2) Brutes. I loved the texture changed you made on the brutes, they look like new enemies :D I'm not quite sure, but there is a white and a black brute, right? And if I saw it correctly, you removed the metal things from the white one. Really awesome job! I believe you are both really good and creative in the 3d design sphere.
3) Story. Well, the story was rather nice, but it isn't really anything heart touching. I kind-of liked it since it was easy to follow, but it wasn't that 'deep'. I hope you can understand me. The perfect story is easy to understand, but also really deep if you dig into it and try to find more information.
4) Bugs. I don't remember seeing any bugs, so that's a total +1 :)
Overall. I really believe you are one of the most creative mod developers around. The way the whole story was structured was just amazing. I already said it at least 5 times, but the design was oh my god... Really had alot of fun playing your story, it deserves 10/10, and that will be my rating :)