This is probably the shortest mod ever :) I had overall 10 hours to finish this. This is my micro mod - entry - for FG Fan Jam I hope you'll like it... !!UPLOADING FILES IS UNAVALIABLE!! !!THIS MOD WILL HAVE NO TRANSLATION!!
Positives:
- Incredible eye for details
- Atmospheric
- Great pacing
Negatives:
- Boring story
- Meh voice acting
Conclusion:
I actually loved the pacing here. You rarely interrupted me with boring puzzles.
It built up tension quite well. You seem to understand the fear of the unknown. You did not go with the same old grunt and instead tried to make your own scares.
The story is unfortunately boring though. You can not make stories about eternal life, sacrifices, guardian, artifacts or anything vanilla-ish interesting anymore.
In regards to the voice acting, take it from someone with many old mods, some with horrible voice acting.
If horrible voice acting is used a lot in a mod, it can severly mess up the immersion. While the voice acting here is very "meh", only a couple of scenes actually have voice acting at all. It wasn't overused, and didn't ruin the entire experience for me.
As a final note, I don't believe you made this in 10 hours. I just don't.
It's too long, too detailed, too well done in general to be made in just 10 hours. Unless you used pre-made assets from your older mods or something (which is fine to do), but if you made this from scratch in just 10 hours, then you either eat and **** level design because this is incredible in that case, or you're lying.
Overall, very well done
8/10 - Very good
This was pretty neat and had a unique atmosphere. One of the better short mods i've played, it had insane details, the time restriction doesn't show at all. While it could feature a bit more tension, and some notes could have been written better (plus the voice acting), but this is great for a 10 hours project. I don't think i've seen this much work done in such a time limit, nice job!
Great atmosphere and design, especially sound design is outstanding. Not that scary and story is rather simple (even though still interesting).
It is difficult to rate this mod because of how short it's, so it cannot be given the maximum rating. The visual and sound content are undoubtedly great, even the creator managed to tell pretty good story in such a small area. The only thing I didn't like is the terrible voice acting of the main character.