In 1950 you wake up and notice that your son and wife are missing so you have to find them and kill him who did this to you. When you save your son and wife there are monster and tryng to kill you so, they are after you and you are trying to escape
This is "The Room" of Amnesia mods and one of my all-time favourites.
Not quite scary. Maps are great but it's fun nevertheless!
Well, this is bad. Besides, this cs has the worst english I've ever seen. Sorry If I sounded too harsh. However, this cs needs to revamp.
very bad
Not good. Way too short, and an extremely abrupt ending... a crash... lol. Either way it needs to be longer, it has potential for sure, as the map design is descent, however there needs to be navmesh for the creatures to roam around, being forced to run is not optimal in a game where you can't fight back, but eh. Just needs to be longer really, and maybe, expand upon the story too?
fatal error on the main door -3
not having an ending -2
Just bad.
Let people test your cs , and the english?
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Thes wash on ov worstest storie evur sien!!!
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That english omg!
Next time DONT upload befor people had tested it out.
too short
Positives:
- A few creative areas and ideas
- Not only keyquests (although all the quests are simple)
- Texts
- I did expect naked guys or other lame jumpscares. None (good job on that part)
- Decently good level design for a new mapper
- I see potential in you
Negatives:
- Low music variation
- Bad lightning (no boxlights for example)
- Really lame story line
- Way too short
- Billboards! But it seems like you got tired of them and stopped using them after awhile. And dark blue/purple billboard lights coming from white/yellow windows? Seriously dude?
- Description said 1950, suddenly it's 1970, I don't get it
- A note said "a monster killed me after I typed this note" or something like that. Grammar, time and logical errors in that line alone.
- And the point with the chemical was?
- Grunt refuse to leave (no "stop" trigger)
- "Ruuun" text. I think it's twice as scary when you have to realize you are being chased by yourself. But it's my own opinion so no points removed. I'm just saying.
- Horrible english (my english is bad as well, but there is a line between bad and horrible. This was a disaster. Even google translate is better)
Conclusion:
It's a really bad story, but for a first story, it's decent. Alot of work is required but I see alot of potential in you. You did not use any lame naked guys scares and you have a certain level of creativity.
So I'm giving it a 3/10. Keep practising, keep testing your way to sucess, and most importantly, be even more creative and a good luck for future stories :)
3/10 - Bad