Reviews - ympanson

this custom story was pretty damn interesting, and well made.
it even had lighting in places!
and only very rarely found something to criticize in the texts.
the story was easily credible. he did a good impression of Alexander even if it was only text. also i love the Aperture Science joke :)
good grammar was nice to see! somewhat a rarity in custom stories.
no need for voice acting unless you're good at it. it usually makes me quit the custom story. don't play "My Lady's Madness" please it'll scar you!
not sure i believe the part where Alexander used electricity to bring a dead guy back from being dead and then it'd just follow all orders given from Alexander ... no, just no. u have to add something to give it a little more credibility. say Alex found strange clay rock in the mine that smelled like **** and gave off fumes but had interesting effects on test subjects. he'd call it substance 8 or something.