"...I know an hour when
time takes the shape of a human,
that restless creature
with soft skin
touches your soul."
I found it interesting, so i decided to share it with you
300 characters 300 characters 300 personalities 300 characters 300 SPARTANS!!! still not 300 dammit is it 300 now? yes it is, oh wait it isn't lets try now
I realize the format of your poem, but I have this feeling a comma should be after 'human'.
It feels like a run-on sentence.
Just saying. :P
You said translation of a translation?
Whats it from?
Thanks for the tip and it was Igor Kotjuh. Russian poet living in Estonia.