Comments - TheLixfe

sup raky

V2 should be an improvement, but this sure doesn't look like it.

1st screenshot looks pretty dope. Rest of the screenshots look like summer version of snowic (aka not that good).

Dont know what is worse shane dawson ******* on his cat or this map

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ay can u make ur maps more square? also why are you using custom textures, its 2019.. xoxo

Deathrun ≠ Speedrun

Nice idea, poorly executed.

I hope this is a joke map. It actually looks worse than the joke maps. Maybe it's joke map from the joke maps?

I hope this is a joke map, tbh its looking worse than joke maps. Maybe it's a joke map from the joke maps?

what r u saying, it's obv 10/10 map

Looks like a sixzorr map judging from the trees

Edit: After testing
-gameplay sucks
-2nd part of the map looks like its the best you've ever done tho
-props for trying to get into detailing

I know it's your first map so Im trying to give you constructive feedback only.

-The maps name doesn't match anything on the map

-First thing I noticed is the rainbow hands.
->look up how to add worldspawn to your map or if you did add light grid.

-map has very dull look, textures are very boring and the layout isn't good.
-> Pick/ Invent a theme, add custom textures, add patches, add models

-the gameplay isn't good, it looks like you added brushes after another by just thinking the first trap that came in to your mind
->First design your gameplay / track, then start editing the track and make traps and surroundings

-you climb ladders half of the time it takes u to complete the track.
->Again pay attention to the gameplay

-Music stopped before I even finished the map
-> Add loop to the soundaliases

-Activators place is way too empty/ or big.
->Make the map look intresting for the activator aswell

-On some of the traps you cant really tell if you activated them or not and you won't get xp activating them
->Add hintstring and xp script

-The rooms are very generic and boring
->Add something unique to the rooms

-Bounce room isn't too easy for beginners
->test the bounces to work with 125fps on g_speed 190 and dr_jumpers_speed 1.0

-Credit the person who you get the scripts from

-What I'd suggest is to take this download down and make a v2 version of this map with my tricks I just told you. The truth is no one wants to play map like this..

Definitely one of the best maps(if not even the best) of 2017!

Positive stuff:
-Love the theme and the fact that you used some details to make the atmosphere even more natural (The map has vibes of some old favorites, but at the same time it's completely new and has awesome feeling)
-Nice amount of patches used
-The 2nd part of the map is one of the best parts about the map
-The secret is nicely fitted in the map( but its faster than normal way so it will be abused to avoid traps*FIX*)
-The activator place goes throught the jumpers environment and isn't floating besides it

Negative stuff:
-annoying musics (file size)xD
-Knifing kills you in sniper room
-traps are quite boring
-some of the rooms are quite boring

What to fix:
-wooden pole jumps ( you can cut them from normal brushes to prevent the buggy effect)
-The first big bounce between the islands is too hard for beginners( maybe make a teleport for beginners that takes like 5secs to teleport or so?)
-The slide (make the slide from terrain or curved patches and try different angles to prevent getting stuck)
-The bounce from the cave before moving platform is way too hard for beginners(make them a separate way or edit the part)
-The last bounce is again too hard for beginners(add a separate way for them or edit the path)

To make players like the map even more you should consider testing to play the map trought like a noob. The whole map should be able to be finished using little if no strafes. When you're testing the map use the default speeds g_speed 190 and dr_jumpers_speed 1.0 . The map is very good for a first map! I hope to see more maps from you and I'll be happy to help mapper like you.

Add patch notes to description please - and when you updated it

I liked the theme idea, but you did almost nothing for it. In some parts you decided to add some details but most of the map has nothing except blank squares. Add more floating stuff as you did and try to make the running ground more alive than just square platform in some parts. The spiral red things look pretty intresting maybe try to implement them more in to the map. As most mappers probably know I really dislike the idea of having two separate ways for jumpers if acti can only choose one of them. If you want to really create two ways for jumpers make it so that activator can acti on both of them from the same place. Because now jumpers get free pass and it's missing the point of deathrun. Finally the endrooms they're pretty ok, but again if you going to make "server exclusive rooms" just make the whole map server exclusive. Imo this map has too many bounces -> which makes it harder for beginners. Jump room is also too hard for beginners.

The map is aight :D (Despite I called out more negative than positive things, I just notice negative stuff better xD)

Positive stuff:
-Lot of original stuff like
-Bulldog and Simon says end room
-Start part gives chance for noobs to complete it and its NOT too long what is a huge plus
-You used lot of shapes instead of just square stuff
-Interesting way to enter 2nd secret

Negative stuff:
-Theme is missing,no custom textures used, almost none detail added
-V.I.P menu (and it skipping little part of the map)
-Only 9 traps
-Secrets skip part of the map (unnecessary free pass for jumpers)
-Too much xp from finishing that easy secrets

Major negative stuff:
-The hard way is unnecessary and should even be deleted. It just basicly gives free pass without traps to the jumper (This ain't cj)
-When you activate trap it takes way too long to activate it. Take away the wait after you activate trap! (Also traps work bit slow, too easy traps)

Fixes:
-2nd secret teleport out lets you bounce on top of the walls clip
-In some parts of the wall the pipe is larger than the square connector, some parts are missing the connector
-The usermaps file is way too big for map this size, delete songs from the .iwd

Damn, never thought cod4 would have mod this awesome.

(Although you're one of the only finnish deathrun mappers w me,) I don't get why are you suddenly releasing maps so often when you could use your time on 1 map and make it 10x better. When I play this map I'm not sure if I'm playing really it or any other of your maps because they're all the same. Add some quality to your maps please. Deathrun is already dying/ almost ded and when I'm seeing maps like this being played on the servers they make me never want to play cod4 deathrun again. You're heading the deathrun mapping quality to wrong direction. You can make quality maps with lot of details and still have low fps.
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How about adding some details to your maps? All I see is the same traps and square jumps repeating on all of your maps. Legit theme would be nice aswell.

No need to rush maps.

This map would have been accepted as a cool map 2 years ago. I don't see a reason why make a map like this, the deathrun mappers are supposed to improve the maps quality instead of keeping it the same. There's 10 maps like this. Same old traps, same old jumps, no originality. Jumps are not tested for flawless flow. You need a theme for a map. Secrets that skips the whole map doesn't fit to deathrun. You did 0 detailing. I would not recommend this map to anyone. If I have to find something positive about this map, it's the sniper room since u added some details there.
If I was you I would take my comment as constructive criticism and make v2 with a good theme, example this map in a city, jumping from buildings or a village or whatever. Lot of models, decals and fx should be used. Adding music is a good idea too.

Pff dropping fps is problem for them who have bad pc :Moon: #DetailsOverNoobyGameplay Nice map mate!

Hey mate we tested this map on our test server. The map wouldnt start and it gave these errors: Gyazo.com
Try deleting these custom characters from the map or add them to iwd.

Check activators place spawn area you cant go forward because there is clip blocking the way.
You should also fix the soundaliases for the ambient song. It starts playing same time the endround music plays. Maybe even change the song to better remix _kappa: Try Illenium remix or Hardwell remix xD

mp_dr_un_named is a nice map, you should change the bounce room tho its way too hard for dr xD

Make a trigger multiple where the map ends called endmap_trig
-It stops the timer and gives time records(if they're fixed on server)
-On some servers it might be crucial to the order rule.
-It's needed if you want that ghost game works on your map.

I really like the looks of this map and love the fact that theres lot of unique stuff! Map is fun to play and nice to run trought.

The map is awesome how it is but to make it reach its full potential you should consider adding or editing these:

-You should edit soundaliases that the songs that you choose at the start are looping.
-Add endmap_trig
-The rooms are pretty boring compared to the other map
-(You should edit that the doors open inwards to make it better for the gameplay)

p.s. How is mp_dr_un_named going?

Best way to approach these stairs is by walking ;)

Works without errors on VC' Deathrun + pXg | Deathrun

Just close your window and you can see the beautifulness :D