Comments - Taylor122002

This is amazing. I really love what you did here. Everything looks fantastic and even playing the original story is, or what feels like, more immersive with a modern time without it actually being a modern game. Would it be possible if I, or anyone who develops, to use some of the entities with our stories such as modern lights (candles, lamps, ect) if given proper credits?

Thank you! I'm going to put a lot of work into this to make it nice and scary! :D

I'm unfortunately terrible with picture sizing. Otherwise I'd LOVE to fix the main header.

I, personally, thought this was a great first custom story.
I liked the story and the endings. It was a little short and there were quite a few notes to read. Nonetheless, it was excellent!
I really like what you did with the flashbacks. It was so simple but so nice.
The custom monster sounds actually scared me. When I was down in the *SPOILER?* cellar and that monster killed the grunt, and then you had to run from the weird "monster" like entity into a hole. That actually made me scared. And I was nervous for the rest of the story from that point on.
I've played so many stories that its now difficult to find a good custom story that isn't a full conversion or stories that I have already played.

Nice amount of detail too and the custom music was perfect!

For such a small custom story, I'll rate this 10/10!

Sorry about the previous comment. That was me and I forgot to sign in.

Oh my sweet baby Jesus can't get past the creepers!! XD

Take pictures in the game? I actually never thought of doing that. XD I sometimes see people take pictures of the level editor so I thought I would too.
But, any other pictures I post will be in-game. Thanks for the tip!

Unfortunately, my computer completely died. So I went out and bought a stronger computer, an actual gaming computer! :D
So, the development will start to pick up again shortly.

You shall die a thousand deaths. Do you hear me?! XD
That pony monster. 'Nuff said.
You even made it so the chase music totally stops, so you think you're in the clear, then, BAM! It's still there! I was hiding and the music stopped, so I left my hiding place because I thought it despawned. And then out of no where I get slashed while the pony says "No! Stay!"
I jumped.
Very nice story though.

You're very welcome! :D

My first custom story I ever played was the Prologue. I absolutely loved it. The Prologue was released a week after I started playing Amnesia--so when I came here for stories and saw the Prologue, I'll admit, I squealed a little. Haha now I came back to re-download the Prologue and saw that you're making a full conversion! That's perfect! I can't wait to play this!

Lol! I didn't intend on the mansion being big--even though its a mansion. XD I just made the tutorial room bigger then what I wanted and I was too lazy to go back to and fix it. However, I'm keeping a close eye on my rooms for the story itself and not the tutorial.

I want people to PLAY the story. Not be...turned off..by silly jump scares. Then rate it low, I'd rather keep it as it is. However, I thought it would be fun to make a troll map. So I'm slowly developing that, although that's not my main priority right now. What is my priority, is releasing a well made first story to show to people that I can also make good stories without having the use for pointless scares that only work once.

Ah, very good point. I will definitely add more details. I originally planned to make the room smaller as I was creating it, but then I created the size it is now and I was too lazy to undo everything. XD Thanks for telling me though, I'll add more detail!

I'm not good with cropping and editing photos to be a good size, or an accurate enough size to fit nicely. I also noticed a couple grammar mistakes in the description. The grammar will be corrected once the Mod has completed the authorization.

Thanks for the information! I didn't know how to make the enemies disappear, and this helped. :D

Never mind, I didn't download this item until now--which explained everything. I will be sure to use this item though! Its a great idea.

This seems like a really cool thing to use in Custom Stories. However, how would I download this so I can use it in the CS and how would I be able to script this to make yourself go faster?